Willow 1

Loose green tendrils hanging low,
kiss the soft green earth, the bough
kneels with the wind 
as if in prayer, a penitent so
humble and predictable, and
just the same as others of its kind;
a pliant bow
 
that's unreleased, yet like to spring
to heaven with a wish,
a stately, monumental king
of meadow and a murmuring stream,
in haze conceal'd, a misty dream,
a graceful monolith 'twould seem,
cloaked in a blue-grey hush.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Deschler Avatar
May 30, 2015 at 5:46 PM
The willow trees are able to express emotions without saying a word... I really enjoyed this elegant write and it's beautiful imagery. Very nicely penned, Keith!
Bickerstaffe Avatar
May 31, 2015 at 11:58 AM
Thank you Kelly... your kind remarks are much appreciated. Keith
Bauer Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 7:57 PM
this is lovely, keith! i especially like the first two lines. i'm looking forward to reading "willow 2."
Bickerstaffe Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 9:42 PM
You are too kind! much appreciated... Keith
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