Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Poet Senryu

Willful Abandon

will  iron wrought
                              
                                bent on abandon to bliss

                                        forges a cage





June 11th 2018


Composed for Brenda Chiri's 
Abandon Poetry Contest

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Gershon Wolf June 14, 2018 at 10:30 PM Deep (I think) ~ Timid Timothy Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 15, 2018 at 6:58 AM Lol ;) xomo!

Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2018 at 2:59 PM Thought provoking! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 13, 2018 at 6:17 PM Merci! xomo :)

Agnes Krampe June 13, 2018 at 5:38 AM That's clever, Maureen; it invites to ponder. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 13, 2018 at 8:00 AM Thank you Agnes :) xomo

Supraja Kannan June 12, 2018 at 5:01 AM A brilliant haiku. Good luck in the contest. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 12, 2018 at 6:58 AM Thank you Supraja! :)) xomo!

Lyric Man June 11, 2018 at 11:12 PM I see different ways this interesting and clever write could be taken! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 12, 2018 at 6:57 AM Cool! Thank you Chance :) xomo!

Mick Talbot June 11, 2018 at 5:21 PM Wow, I like, good luck in the contest! Mick Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 11, 2018 at 10:21 PM Thank you! Much appreciated :) xomo!