Willful Abandon

will iron wrought bent on abandon to bliss forges a cage June 11th 2018 Composed for Brenda Chiri's Abandon Poetry Contest

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/14/2018 10:30:00 PM

Deep (I think) ~ Timid Timothy

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/15/2018 6:58:00 AM

Lol ;) xomo!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2018 2:59:00 PM

Thought provoking!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/13/2018 6:17:00 PM

Merci! xomo :)

Agnes Krampe

Date: 6/13/2018 5:38:00 AM

That's clever, Maureen; it invites to ponder.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/13/2018 8:00:00 AM

Thank you Agnes :) xomo

Supraja Kannan

Date: 6/12/2018 5:01:00 AM

A brilliant haiku. Good luck in the contest.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/12/2018 6:58:00 AM

Thank you Supraja! :)) xomo!

Lyric Man

Date: 6/11/2018 11:12:00 PM

I see different ways this interesting and clever write could be taken!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/12/2018 6:57:00 AM

Cool! Thank you Chance :) xomo!

Mick Talbot

Date: 6/11/2018 5:21:00 PM

Wow, I like, good luck in the contest! Mick

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/11/2018 10:21:00 PM

Thank you! Much appreciated :) xomo!