David O'Haolin Whalen Poet Rhyme

Will You Miss Me

Will you miss me
When I’m gone?…
I really rather
Doubt it.

Will you miss
What used to be
Once you’ve gone 
 A while without it?

Will you miss my words
My painful prose
My labored rhymes
I tried to pose?

Or will you even 
Know I’ve gone
And if so, will you 
Even care?

Will you miss 
The laughs, the virtual hugs…
the  words and phrases
That we used to share

The kind comments full..
Of lavish praises
For poems cast out
In the blue nowhere


I really rather doubt it!

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Elenushka Toledo November 29, 2012 at 8:04 PM I love how you wave the words, I feel them in my own words. Have a beautiful evening David. My name is Elena nice to meet you?

Carol Sunshine Brown September 7, 2012 at 6:55 AM My weekend is about to begin and I am enjoying reading such amazing and diverse poetry this morning. I am so pleased to see your writings posted here David. Hoping you have a happy sun filled weekend full of love, joy and inspiration. Love, Carol

Sukmawati Komala September 7, 2012 at 12:17 AM great write David..enjoy this much :)waiting to read more of your great writes :) luv and hug ..SK