Will You Be There

A day without thoughts another sleep without dreams. A love filled heart beating slowly that holds love above all things. My mind searches for repentance as love floats above all the earth. I wait for it to begin to rain down giving all life some meaning and worth. Distraught, sad and somber still pretending to hold a smile. Unable to happily hold it as it fades after a short while. The world that I envisioned was to be better then what we now have. To grow stronger,more forgiving and together without spite, greed and murder that leaves us sad. As lifes final days draw near us all when Gods will shall finely be done. Hoping to see you all in heaven where we might all meet as one.
*To all the people of PoetrySoup* Dannyboy 8-22-12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/13/2014 7:36:00 PM
Nice,yes,we all are sons of Heaven and go to back all men and women.
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Date: 4/10/2013 10:34:00 AM
That poem is beautiful Dan.....you are such a gentleman thank You. Love Terry xoxo
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Date: 10/3/2012 11:58:00 PM
very nice poem ..thank you for sharing your great work Dan..<3<3<3 .>SK
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Date: 10/1/2012 2:49:00 AM
I hope there a lots of us in Heaven.....some really nice lines throughout this poem Dan.
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Date: 9/29/2012 6:27:00 AM
Wow...what a beautiful poems. It really draws you in.
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Date: 8/30/2012 7:09:00 PM
we'll be there waiting with open arms for you for this what a poetry family will do.
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Date: 8/28/2012 1:24:00 PM
Yes Dannyboy I will be there (smiles). What a lovely tribute....your are so 'sweet'! BTW, I call my 2nd son Dannyboy all the time. Hugs
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Date: 8/26/2012 9:17:00 AM
you are absolutely the best,like a John Lennon, thank you for sharing with us,Ivy
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Date: 8/25/2012 8:00:00 PM
had to read a second time my friend. love, love, love your poetry!!! you are special to me friend. Cindy
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Date: 8/25/2012 11:59:00 AM
Awww....this was quite touching. =) What a sweet verse! You're such an uplifting poet, even if your poems have a rather sad touch. Always, Laura
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Date: 8/25/2012 3:43:00 AM
A lovely verse and I agree there is so much sadness throughout the world. For a world of peace, our hearts we must unite. Cynthia
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Date: 8/23/2012 10:16:00 PM
oh, dannyboy, love your name and the song it makes me think of! This is a very sweet tribute to your friends at the soup. It was great to see this tonight.
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Date: 8/23/2012 8:45:00 PM
Dan, I love the title you gave this one.. That time is certainly upon us.. Thanks for spending some time on my side of the world ;) Wilma
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Date: 8/23/2012 1:57:00 PM
Hello Dannyboy! Nice poem! I liked it!Good work!! Hugs - Laila
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Dan Kearley
Date: 8/23/2012 3:28:00 PM
Well hello! :o) Thank you! Hugs back at ya..
Date: 8/23/2012 3:33:00 AM
Beautiful written Dan...moving yes, but true. - meets in heaven... sing and dance...peace and love... - f.e.f. love Anne-Lise :)
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Dan Kearley
Date: 8/23/2012 3:25:00 PM
Sing and dance...Peace and love. :o) I like that! :o) f.e.f. oxox
Date: 8/22/2012 11:34:00 PM
so touching my friend. Very good poetry, cheer up... such a well expressed poetic pice of livlihood as we all surly can relate. Love ya, Cindy
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Dan Kearley
Date: 8/23/2012 3:22:00 PM
Thank you,Cindy :o) Yup,yup! Relate...
Date: 8/22/2012 7:55:00 PM
What a peaceful and happy tho't to see all your friends in heaven...if only it were that easy, right?
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Dan Kearley
Date: 8/22/2012 8:29:00 PM
Right! :o) I'm sure you'll be there thou right? Hee,hee...
Date: 8/22/2012 6:42:00 PM
A beautiful poem, Dan. Love, Kim
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Dan Kearley
Date: 8/22/2012 7:46:00 PM
Thank you,Kim... I'm happy to know you enjoyed it! :o) Always a pleasure...
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Dan Kearley
Date: 8/22/2012 7:46:00 PM
Opps! With Love <3 (o:
Date: 8/22/2012 6:04:00 PM
Ooooh, nice. I'm so happy to have discovered you, Dannyboy. Good work!! :)
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Dan Kearley
Date: 8/22/2012 7:43:00 PM
Thank you very much! :o)
Date: 8/22/2012 3:13:00 PM
I loved this!! I am making it a favorite.. have a great day!! cory
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Dan Kearley
Date: 8/22/2012 4:13:00 PM
Alright! Thanks Cory..Have A great day yourself.
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