Will You Be There

A day without thoughts another sleep without dreams. A love filled heart beating slowly that holds love above all things. My mind searches for repentance as love floats above all the earth. I wait for it to begin to rain down giving all life some meaning and worth. Distraught, sad and somber still pretending to hold a smile. Unable to happily hold it as it fades after a short while. The world that I envisioned was to be better then what we now have. To grow stronger,more forgiving and together without spite, greed and murder that leaves us sad. As lifes final days draw near us all when Gods will shall finely be done. Hoping to see you all in heaven where we might all meet as one.
*To all the people of PoetrySoup* Dannyboy 8-22-12
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Thajudeen Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 7:36 PM
Nice,yes,we all are sons of Heaven and go to back all men and women.
Bacha Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 10:34 AM
That poem is beautiful Dan.....you are such a gentleman thank You. Love Terry xoxo
Komala Avatar
October 3, 2012 at 11:58 PM
very nice poem ..thank you for sharing your great work Dan..<3<3<3 .>SK
Cheesman Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 2:49 AM
I hope there a lots of us in Heaven.....some really nice lines throughout this poem Dan.
Moore Avatar
September 29, 2012 at 6:27 AM
Wow...what a beautiful poems. It really draws you in.
Rams Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 7:09 PM
we'll be there waiting with open arms for you for this what a poetry family will do.
Macfarlane Avatar
August 28, 2012 at 1:24 PM
Yes Dannyboy I will be there (smiles). What a lovely tribute....your are so 'sweet'! BTW, I call my 2nd son Dannyboy all the time. Hugs
Vresk Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 9:17 AM
you are absolutely the best,like a John Lennon, thank you for sharing with us,Ivy
Cayton Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 8:00 PM
had to read a second time my friend. love, love, love your poetry!!! you are special to me friend. Cindy
Breidenthal Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 11:59 AM
Awww....this was quite touching. =) What a sweet verse! You're such an uplifting poet, even if your poems have a rather sad touch. Always, Laura
Alvez Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 3:43 AM
A lovely verse and I agree there is so much sadness throughout the world. For a world of peace, our hearts we must unite. Cynthia
Dietrich Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 10:16 PM
oh, dannyboy, love your name and the song it makes me think of! This is a very sweet tribute to your friends at the soup. It was great to see this tonight.
Neels Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 8:45 PM
Dan, I love the title you gave this one.. That time is certainly upon us.. Thanks for spending some time on my side of the world ;) Wilma
Mjelde Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 1:57 PM
Hello Dannyboy! Nice poem! I liked it!Good work!! Hugs - Laila
Kearley Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 3:28 PM
Well hello! :o) Thank you! Hugs back at ya..
Andresen Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 3:33 AM
Beautiful written Dan...moving yes, but true. - meets in heaven... sing and dance...peace and love... - f.e.f. love Anne-Lise :)
Kearley Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 3:25 PM
Sing and dance...Peace and love. :o) I like that! :o) f.e.f. oxox
Cayton Avatar
August 22, 2012 at 11:34 PM
so touching my friend. Very good poetry, cheer up... such a well expressed poetic pice of livlihood as we all surly can relate. Love ya, Cindy
Kearley Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 3:22 PM
Thank you,Cindy :o) Yup,yup! Relate...
Song Avatar
August 22, 2012 at 7:55 PM
What a peaceful and happy tho't to see all your friends in heaven...if only it were that easy, right?
Kearley Avatar
August 22, 2012 at 8:29 PM
Right! :o) I'm sure you'll be there thou right? Hee,hee...
Merryman Avatar
August 22, 2012 at 6:42 PM
A beautiful poem, Dan. Love, Kim
Kearley Avatar
August 22, 2012 at 7:46 PM
Thank you,Kim... I'm happy to know you enjoyed it! :o) Always a pleasure...
Kearley Avatar
August 22, 2012 at 7:46 PM
Opps! With Love <3 (o:
Hendricks Avatar
August 22, 2012 at 6:04 PM
Ooooh, nice. I'm so happy to have discovered you, Dannyboy. Good work!! :)
Kearley Avatar
August 22, 2012 at 7:43 PM
Thank you very much! :o)
Long Avatar
August 22, 2012 at 3:13 PM
I loved this!! I am making it a favorite.. have a great day!! cory
Kearley Avatar
August 22, 2012 at 4:13 PM
Alright! Thanks Cory..Have A great day yourself.
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