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in our first year, i said a lot of words but i think you said a lot more you were on some other guys mind but baby i had yours 60 miles ain't no stones throw so we would talk on the phone say things like 'hey how are you?' but mainly i miss you will you find some time for me i think i'd make you smile will you walk and talk with me i think it'd be worth your while 'cause i like to build real tall things and say whats on my mind but lately i've been tearing you down and the words have only been mine so i cover it up with my 'hey how are you's' but if you were to step inside i'm afraid you'd be torn apart and i'd be tossed aside our third year was a lot like that a train fall off their tracks so i'm singing you this brand new tune 'cause honey all i want is you

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Date: 2/4/2012 1:25:00 AM
Nice write :-)
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Kevin Anderson
Date: 2/4/2012 1:30:00 AM
thanks my man!
Date: 1/30/2012 2:39:00 PM
Thanks a whole lot! means a lot that you thought it was 'comment worthy', God bless!
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Date: 1/29/2012 11:13:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Kevin. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/28/2012 3:44:00 AM
Lovely poem Kevin, like it alot!!!oxox love Anne-Lise
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