Will You

in our first year, i said a lot of words
but i think you said a lot more
you were on some other guys mind
but baby i had yours

60 miles ain't no stones throw
so we would talk on the phone
say things like 'hey how are you?'
but mainly i miss you

will you find some time for me
i think i'd make you smile
will you walk and talk with me
i think it'd be worth your while

'cause i like to build real tall things
and say whats on my mind
but lately i've been tearing you down
and the words have only been mine

so i cover it up with my 'hey how are you's'
but if you were to step inside
i'm afraid you'd be torn apart
and i'd be tossed aside

our third year was a lot like that
a train fall off their tracks
so i'm singing you this brand new tune
'cause honey all i want is you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Davis Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 1:25 AM
Nice write :-)
Anderson Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 1:30 AM
thanks my man!
Anderson Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 2:39 PM
Thanks a whole lot! means a lot that you thought it was 'comment worthy', God bless!
Brown Avatar
January 29, 2012 at 11:13 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Kevin. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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January 28, 2012 at 3:44 AM
Lovely poem Kevin, like it alot!!!oxox love Anne-Lise
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