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Wilder and Wilder Dancing

Frenzied, melodic tunes are playing, in the lime green forests,
In whistles, croaks and chirping, where jade growth is lawless,
And nature is humming and dancing, all over the azure world-
Then colors dance on even skies, where sunset lately swirled.

Stars and moon gaze all nighttime, at the never ending ballet,
With its sudden leaps and easy jumps, while the crickets play,
And when morning returns, they are doing the lively quickstep,
To magenta, dawn singing, and as always, there is no misstep.
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Leiser Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 8:49 PM
What a delightful and clever poem, Evelyn! I really enjoyed reading this..thanks! :)
Buehler Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 9:37 PM
You're very welcome, Laura. Thank you for your comments, so uplifting. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
October 3, 2022 at 1:55 AM
What a wonderful poem, you color it like a painting.
Buehler Avatar
October 3, 2022 at 11:28 AM
Flamingos have 136 combinations of dance moves. They're a joy to watch. Thank you very much for your thoughts. :)
Gauthier Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 10:06 PM
Sweet, Evelyn. Delightful colour scheme ~
Buehler Avatar
October 3, 2022 at 11:29 AM
Thank you for your kind remarks, Line. :)
Roper Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 9:18 PM
Colorful write, a canvas of beauty. Blessings my dear
Buehler Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 9:40 PM
Thank you very much, my friend. Have a wonderful week.
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