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Wildcat Wanders

Wildcat wanders about among the wildflowers searching for a tasty rabbit hungry 2-12-2020 Modern OR Traditional Cinquain Poetry Contest William Kekaula

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Jenish Somadas

Date: 2/23/2020 11:19:00 PM

Fantastic write Kiser.. Congrats..

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/28/2020 9:37:00 PM

Thank you.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/23/2020 4:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, M.L., perfect poem with fantastic flow. Hugs Eve

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/28/2020 9:38:00 PM

Many thanks.

Ann Foster

Date: 2/17/2020 5:14:00 PM

hehe... so vivid... i love it... ann

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/18/2020 9:00:00 AM

Thank you.

Sandra Adams

Date: 2/14/2020 8:35:00 PM

good job with this, I can see it...though I feel for the rabbit and want to help him slip into a whole and remain hidden... :)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/18/2020 9:01:00 AM

So do I, I have lost a number of bunnies from my yard over the last couple of years to turkey buzzards though. Too sad. Thanks.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/13/2020 9:52:00 AM

I like this one can't remember if the Cinquain is where the last word is suppose to be another word for the first word or not but I got some humor anyway in this one. Sara

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/13/2020 12:42:00 PM

I think it can work either way, will have to look into that. Thanks.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/12/2020 9:03:00 PM

Hahahahahah. Love the last word's twist... Although maybe the wildcat actually prefers chipmunks?! Ya think?! Great! :) Cheers, Gershon

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/13/2020 12:42:00 PM

Possibly, I can not say that I've ever been inside of a wildcat's head. Thanks.