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Wildcat Wanders

Wildcat
wanders about
among the wildflowers
searching for a tasty rabbit
hungry
 

2-12-2020
Modern OR Traditional Cinquain Poetry Contest
William Kekaula

animalcatnaturepoemspoetrycinquain

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Jenish Somadas

February 23, 2020 at 11:19 PM

Fantastic write Kiser.. Congrats..

M. L. Kiser

February 28, 2020 at 9:37 PM

Thank you.

Eve Roper

February 23, 2020 at 4:06 PM

Congratulations on your win, M.L., perfect poem with fantastic flow. Hugs Eve

M. L. Kiser

February 28, 2020 at 9:38 PM

Many thanks.

Ann Foster

February 17, 2020 at 5:14 PM

hehe... so vivid... i love it... ann

M. L. Kiser

February 18, 2020 at 9:00 AM

Thank you.

Sandra Adams

February 14, 2020 at 8:35 PM

good job with this, I can see it...though I feel for the rabbit and want to help him slip into a whole and remain hidden... :)

M. L. Kiser

February 18, 2020 at 9:01 AM

So do I, I have lost a number of bunnies from my yard over the last couple of years to turkey buzzards though. Too sad. Thanks.

Sara Kendrick

February 13, 2020 at 9:52 AM

I like this one can't remember if the Cinquain is where the last word is suppose to be another word for the first word or not but I got some humor anyway in this one. Sara

M. L. Kiser

February 13, 2020 at 12:42 PM

I think it can work either way, will have to look into that. Thanks.