Wild Winter Weir

in fair weather wood
the river deep then rapid
where it always rains

© Harry J Horsman 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 10/25/2018 4:53:00 PM
Nicely written!
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Date: 6/17/2018 11:20:00 AM
Profoundly beautiful haiku capturing the wonder of nature! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 2/8/2018 2:19:00 AM
Hello Harry, it really seems like forever once that rain starts to close in; and with the british light interaction gives it its own niche among the world environments' oh and I've sent some mail.
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Date: 1/14/2018 7:19:00 PM
This is so interesting to me, Harry. "where it always rains" is a great third line for your Ku because it's obvious and yet by saying it, you add emphasis to the fact. I really like that!
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Date: 1/12/2018 10:10:00 AM
wonderful pivot-- fair weather to rain---well expressed, harry... huggs!
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Date: 1/12/2018 6:57:00 AM
Great haiku... seems to rain everywhere at the moment..
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Date: 1/12/2018 6:23:00 AM
You painted this picture well my friend..lovely Haiku, harry.
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Date: 1/11/2018 11:14:00 PM
Well done, Harry, Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 1/11/2018 6:20:00 PM
Hello Harry, that's the kind of winter ride, i'd stay away from. Great looking haiku. LINDA
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