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Wild Winter Weir

in fair weather wood
the river deep then rapid
where it always rains

© Harry J Horsman 2017

Copyright © Harry Horsman | Year Posted 2018

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October 25, 2018 at 4:53 PM

Nicely written!

Pandita Sietesantos

June 17, 2018 at 11:20 AM

Profoundly beautiful haiku capturing the wonder of nature! Hugs. Pandita

February 8, 2018 at 2:19 AM

Hello Harry, it really seems like forever once that rain starts to close in; and with the british light interaction gives it its own niche among the world environments' oh and I've sent some mail.

Andrea Dietrich

January 14, 2018 at 7:19 PM

This is so interesting to me, Harry. "where it always rains" is a great third line for your Ku because it's obvious and yet by saying it, you add emphasis to the fact. I really like that!

January 12, 2018 at 10:10 AM

wonderful pivot-- fair weather to rain---well expressed, harry... huggs!

January 12, 2018 at 6:57 AM

Great haiku... seems to rain everywhere at the moment..

January 12, 2018 at 6:23 AM

You painted this picture well my friend..lovely Haiku, harry.

January 11, 2018 at 11:14 PM

Well done, Harry, Hugs Eve ~`*

Poet Destroyer A

January 11, 2018 at 6:20 PM

Hello Harry, that's the kind of winter ride, i'd stay away from. Great looking haiku. LINDA

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