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Wild Rose

There, beyond the garden wall, are fronds of grass and weeds grown tall A wild rose pleads for a breath of sun just like a child who needs some fun A greedy shade has kept her shunned She is watered, fed, by pearls of dew hidden by the scattered hues of red, and green, and swirling blues where no one has seen, her beauty, true While blushing pale, of velvet blooms she fills the vales and afternoon with fragrant gifts, that lift the gloom She shifts and winds her tendrils loom to trail her vines with sweet perfumes prevailing through the twilight, soon She's has lost her petals one by one Tossed by evening's billowing tease They land beneath the willow trees, which band together, if to please the sun that gathers with the breeze in carpet for the birds and bees
________________________________________________ 1/21/15 For the contest: Interlocking Rhyme Sponsored by Isaiah
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February 15, 2015 at 10:20 AM
Carrie This is a sweet lovely win. *Skat LOVE*
Lindley Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 7:58 AM
As always your writes are so very descriptive and smooth. Adding this fine jewel to my fav list as it strikes me as a superb poem! I hope that reading it often may inspire improvement in my writings!!!!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 2:50 AM
This entry is really lovely Carrie. Your imagery is outstanding. Congrats on your top win. Cheers, Connie
Haight Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 5:29 PM
Very beautifully-written, Carrie. Congratulations on your nice win! Hugs, Sandra
A. Sharma Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 4:02 AM
Wow that's an amazing one Carrie! A super 7 n huge congrats on big win!
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February 2, 2015 at 10:04 PM
Beautiful imagery and words that flow so easily...just lovely, Carrie!! Congrats on a wonderful win...hugs, Rhonda
Allison Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 12:01 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Carrie:-) Hugs jan xx
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January 22, 2015 at 2:36 AM
Thank you Carrie for your kind comments on my endeavours.Yes Marianne is perhaps one of favourite poets (mostly female incidentally !) have just finished a biography of her,hence the poem.Best wishes with your creative endeavours.rgds Brian
Allison Avatar
January 21, 2015 at 5:25 PM
beautiful rhyme and wonderful imagery - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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