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Wild Lightning, Spooks and Me

I'm as free as the wind as I sway in the saddle! I love life! There's no clutter, nothing to addle! I give my faithful horse Wild Lightning free rein, As we meander across God's magnificent terrain! My pal Spooks trots ahead surveying sagebrush and crags. I sense that he enjoys life too by the tail he wags! I crave no roof - the wide-open range is my home. Territorial bounds don't confine me - freely I roam! Well-worn saddlebags contain my earthly possessions. I don't aspire riches nor am I burdened by obsessions. My soul abounds with wealth as I view His Creation! Ah! The grandeur of it all! 'Tis ample compensation! I pause on a knoll viewing the vast panorama and ponder, The river, a lake, those snow-capped mountains o'er yonder! In the valley a herd of pronghorn antelope gambol and play. At dusk The Master Artist paints a majestic sunset display! Campfire embers slowly die - Wild Lightning grazes nearby. Spooks lies at my feet - snug in my blanket I gaze at the sky. I anticipate being awakened by a glorious sunrise next morn, When Wild Lightning, Spooks and I continue our vagabond bourne! Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/28/2023 7:14:00 PM
Outstanding..,you write so well,Cowboy. Phenomenal imagery and story line Pangiexoxo RR
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 1/29/2023 6:25:00 AM
Thank you, Pangie: I love the great West and love to write about it - lots of snow here today! Bob
Date: 4/14/2012 9:17:00 AM
lovely write, as always, bob. hope to hear more of their adventures. hope you and vera have a great weekend
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Date: 4/14/2012 8:02:00 AM
a wonderful description of a cowboy's journey with his faithful horse and dog. i could picture it all so clearly. thanks for an entertaining write! by the way, i can't believe you figured out that my poem was written about monticello - very good detective work! we also visited the homes of madison, monroe and washington, but i was thinking of jefferson's home when i wrote the poem.
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Date: 4/13/2012 11:59:00 PM
Another beauty from you so descriptive I felt like I was on the journey, too. Thanks for sharing. I always enjoy reading your amazing writes. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 4/13/2012 10:29:00 PM
I am drawn into this by your masterful description of the wilds I spend so much time in. It's like reading an Ansel Adams photograph. - Chuck
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Date: 4/13/2012 7:44:00 PM
Outstanding Magnificent post.. One for my favs :)
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Date: 4/13/2012 6:42:00 PM
Another Awesome offering, my friend. Enjoyed. All's well here. Hope same for you guys. Have a super weekend. Thanks for your recent comments. All our best and God bless. Una/Ralphie
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Date: 4/13/2012 4:26:00 PM
Masterpiece!!! you put your heart into this one and it shows. at first i was frightened by the lenght but the content more than made up for it. i was riding along with you.
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Date: 4/13/2012 3:58:00 PM
I read this like a breath of fresh air and said Ah! with you ..(smile) - Diana
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