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just a try of this acrostic contest. hope i did it right..but it was wrong. not in accordance with the rule. so i have to pull it out... thanks for reading! hugs!

WILD ACROSTIC Whether we are weary, distraught, so down and hurt Enjoy life, join right or left-feet dance, laugh out loud. Whether the world turns us upside down In failure, despair or anything that makes us cry and frown. Liquor is never a solution, beer may do, never on drugs Live a healthy life every day, keep doing our best. Places in this world are so beautiful. Visit. Get our chance! Amusement parks here and there, get all the rides. Remember that life is too short, Take time to shop, sing on karaoke, stroll around You and I got to be good while we go crazy at times. Love a lot every day like a downpour from above Ignite our passions in music, dancing, poetry or arts Keep doing it, happiness is a great reward Enjoy life, join right or left-feet dance, laugh out loud! The future is uncertain, tonight we may die Have our luggage packed, carry them so light Eat a lot but take time to exercise Rest assure we’re in good shapes all the time Establish good relationship with everyone Share in their company as they jig and bounce No vices while we go with all these head bangs Over the hills, ecstasy will only be music in all kinds Tomorrow may not come, tonight we may die Our life is like a butterfly, don’t you wonder why? Make it so happy and healthy, let’s do our best Over our dead body, don’t ruin it with worries and fear Remember that each one is unique- God’s love and care Remember our family whom we can always rely on Orchestra of life is playing. Spruce up… no more sorrow and We will party like there’s no tomorrow! Oct. 17, 2016 6.50pm ©2016Leonora Galinta All Rights Reserved

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Date: 10/19/2016 8:36:00 PM
Galeo... enjoyed reading, good luck in the contest Hugs Eve
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/31/2016 12:14:00 PM
Oh, thank you so much my dear friend, Eve. Good luck in the contest and best wishes to you as well always. I'll visit you and your poems soon. I promise. Hugs!
Date: 10/18/2016 3:28:00 PM
wow, good job, Leonora. I like how you kept it "general." To include all the different ways to enjoy life fully . I hope to study up on Okoberfest and try to do one on that exact holiday! Good luck in the contest, dear.
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Date: 10/18/2016 7:05:00 PM
Thank you so much my dear friend, Andrea but I've already removed this from the contest. I think it's not what the judge is looking for.:) I appreciate so much your precious time stopping by. God bless. Hugs!
Date: 10/17/2016 11:35:00 PM
Oh la la !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/18/2016 12:41:00 AM
Thank you so much. Hugs.
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/18/2016 12:40:00 AM
Oh.... la la la.... yah!!!! :)) Thank you so much my dear friend. But this is wrong. I'm not submitting this for the contest. I mean I have to pull this out :)))). I didn't understand the rule. I appreciate so much your stopping by
Date: 10/17/2016 11:27:00 PM
very nice poem my dear friend ;) how are you? been busy and lazy to write poems lately. just seldom online here. I miss you, take care always. God bless mwuah!!!
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/18/2016 12:37:00 AM
Awe! Hello! It's been a long time! Thank you for stopping by and your comment. I'm good with God's help though always super busy. I thought I'll be having my break and here, just have an urgent call for a special assignment about the king ;( wah! I lost my concentration again. And why seldom like me? Likewise my dear friend. Hugs and kisses!
Date: 10/17/2016 10:27:00 AM
This one is really wonderful, Leonora:) all the best:) a 7:)
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/18/2016 12:42:00 AM
Oh, thank you my dear friend, Jo. Your visit and comment are so much appreciated! Hugs!
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/18/2016 12:33:00 AM
Oh, thank you my dear friend. Your visit and comment is so much appreciated! Hugs!

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