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just a try of this acrostic contest. hope i did it right..but it was wrong. not in accordance with the rule. so i have to pull it out... thanks for reading! hugs!

Wild Acrostic of Life

WILD ACROSTIC

Whether we are weary, distraught, so down and hurt
Enjoy life, join right or left-feet dance, laugh out loud.

Whether the world turns us upside down
In failure, despair or anything that makes us cry and frown.
Liquor is never a solution, beer may do, never on drugs
Live a healthy life every day, keep doing our best.

Places in this world are so beautiful. Visit. Get our chance!
Amusement parks here and there, get all the rides.
Remember that life is too short, 
Take time to shop, sing on karaoke, stroll around
You and I got to be good while we go crazy at times.

Love a lot every day like a downpour from above
Ignite our passions in music, dancing, poetry or arts
Keep doing it, happiness is a great reward 
Enjoy life, join right or left-feet dance, laugh out loud!


The future is uncertain, tonight we may die
Have our luggage packed, carry them so light
Eat a lot but take time to exercise
Rest assure we’re in good shapes all the time
Establish good relationship with everyone
Share in their company as they jig and bounce

No vices while we go with all these head bangs
Over the hills, ecstasy will only be  music in all kinds

Tomorrow may not come, tonight we may die
Our life is like a butterfly, don’t you wonder why?
Make it so happy and healthy, let’s do our best
Over our dead body, don’t ruin it with worries and fear
Remember that each one is unique- God’s love and care
Remember our family whom we can always rely on
Orchestra of life is playing.  Spruce up… no more sorrow and
We will party like there’s no tomorrow!

Oct. 17, 2016         6.50pm
©2016Leonora Galinta
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Roper Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 8:36 PM
Galeo... enjoyed reading, good luck in the contest Hugs Eve
Gasun Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 12:14 PM
Oh, thank you so much my dear friend, Eve. Good luck in the contest and best wishes to you as well always. I'll visit you and your poems soon. I promise. Hugs!
Dietrich Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 3:28 PM
wow, good job, Leonora. I like how you kept it "general." To include all the different ways to enjoy life fully . I hope to study up on Okoberfest and try to do one on that exact holiday! Good luck in the contest, dear.
Gasun Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 7:05 PM
Thank you so much my dear friend, Andrea but I've already removed this from the contest. I think it's not what the judge is looking for.:) I appreciate so much your precious time stopping by. God bless. Hugs!
Vaso Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 11:35 PM
Oh la la !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Gasun Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 12:41 AM
Thank you so much. Hugs.
Gasun Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 12:40 AM
Oh.... la la la.... yah!!!! :)) Thank you so much my dear friend. But this is wrong. I'm not submitting this for the contest. I mean I have to pull this out :)))). I didn't understand the rule. I appreciate so much your stopping by
Liwayway Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 11:27 PM
very nice poem my dear friend ;) how are you? been busy and lazy to write poems lately. just seldom online here. I miss you, take care always. God bless mwuah!!!
Gasun Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 12:37 AM
Awe! Hello! It's been a long time! Thank you for stopping by and your comment. I'm good with God's help though always super busy. I thought I'll be having my break and here, just have an urgent call for a special assignment about the king ;( wah! I lost my concentration again. And why seldom like me? Likewise my dear friend. Hugs and kisses!
Daniel Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 10:27 AM
This one is really wonderful, Leonora:) all the best:) a 7:)
Gasun Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 12:42 AM
Oh, thank you my dear friend, Jo. Your visit and comment are so much appreciated! Hugs!
Gasun Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 12:33 AM
Oh, thank you my dear friend. Your visit and comment is so much appreciated! Hugs!
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