Premiere Contest WinnerWild

4/26/2020
Wild poetry contest
Sponsor Anthony Slausin

The collared dog awaits his master’s love
and laps and licks the blessed hand above,

while the wolf, ephemeral shaddow of the unbiddable wild
drinks from the crystal streams descending the mountain.
(He drinks from the palm of creation.)

Obedient pets sit, with poise, awaiting treats,
or scratch the door, the scent of cedars sweet,
but too far,

while the wolf runs through the bright brush at the bull elk, those bellowing lungs a trumpet
announcing to the deeps the shadows of the forest live.

The Good await the chance to thrust their nose
into the rushing wind as Civics go,

while the wolf encircles the dust to lay and lick
all the delectable scents of the wind in his fur.

Faithfully the pet lays, alone on the steel table
wondering where his master is, the scent of the vet
surrounds him like wolves
that eat the walls of the room
until he is free.
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Inman Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 2:02 PM
Great imagery Jack. All dogs yearn to run free but all pets will always come home.
Webster Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 11:54 AM
Thank you, James!
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 5:13 PM
This poem clutches at the heart with its unbridled poignancy Jack! When we finally forced ourselves to put down our golden childhood cocker spaniel Who was riddled with cancer...dragging his hind legs, I felt such betrayal of his loving trust. My forgiveness was in knowing he was no longer suffering and free. Your talent shines brightly in this winning poem Jack. Congratulations on your win! Blessings xxoo
Webster Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 1:32 AM
Thanks, Connie!
Dunlap Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 5:05 PM
I prefer cats, but dogs are okay too. This is intriguing, when you describe the wolf. All in all it was fun to read. Bon boulot.
Webster Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 11:42 PM
Merci, Mssr. Dunlap
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 1:27 PM
Hello Jack Webster, dogs do not like vets. When they are in the car dogs knows they are going tothe vet. They whine and shake all the way there. Enjoy your day my friend.
Webster Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 11:42 PM
You too, Darlene!
Goldsmith Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 5:48 PM
Congratulations on your win. I love where you say, "The collared dog awaits his master’s love and laps and licks the blessed hand above." So very true. Enjoy your day and win........
Webster Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 6:39 PM
Thank you Paula!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 12:48 PM
Back for more :)
Webster Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 2:31 PM
Welcome back to the wild :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 7:51 PM
Wow. Now that is a POEM. I second Anthony's "yes". A fave. Congratulations on a most deserved top win Jack. I am chasing my tail ingesting this piece. xomo
Webster Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 8:01 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 5:38 PM
Love the contrast at the end! Nice! Congratulations on top win!
Webster Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 6:52 PM
Thank you, Kim!
Bianco Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 5:21 PM
yes
Webster Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 6:52 PM
Thanks, Anthony!
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