Wild Premiere Contest Winner

4/26/2020
Wild poetry contest
Sponsor Anthony Slausin

The collared dog awaits his master’s love
and laps and licks the blessed hand above,

while the wolf, ephemeral shaddow of the unbiddable wild
drinks from the crystal streams descending the mountain.
(He drinks from the palm of creation.)

Obedient pets sit, with poise, awaiting treats,
or scratch the door, the scent of cedars sweet,
but too far,

while the wolf runs through the bright brush at the bull elk, those bellowing lungs a trumpet
announcing to the deeps the shadows of the forest live.

The Good await the chance to thrust their nose
into the rushing wind as Civics go,

while the wolf encircles the dust to lay and lick
all the delectable scents of the wind in his fur.

Faithfully the pet lays, alone on the steel table
wondering where his master is, the scent of the vet
surrounds him like wolves
that eat the walls of the room
until he is free.

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Date: 5/16/2020 2:02:00 PM
Great imagery Jack. All dogs yearn to run free but all pets will always come home.
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Jack Webster
Date: 5/17/2020 11:54:00 AM
Thank you, James!
Date: 5/15/2020 5:13:00 PM
This poem clutches at the heart with its unbridled poignancy Jack! When we finally forced ourselves to put down our golden childhood cocker spaniel Who was riddled with cancer...dragging his hind legs, I felt such betrayal of his loving trust. My forgiveness was in knowing he was no longer suffering and free. Your talent shines brightly in this winning poem Jack. Congratulations on your win! Blessings xxoo
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Jack Webster
Date: 5/16/2020 1:32:00 AM
Thanks, Connie!
Date: 5/15/2020 5:05:00 PM
I prefer cats, but dogs are okay too. This is intriguing, when you describe the wolf. All in all it was fun to read. Bon boulot.
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Jack Webster
Date: 5/15/2020 11:42:00 PM
Merci, Mssr. Dunlap
Date: 5/13/2020 1:27:00 PM
Hello Jack Webster, dogs do not like vets. When they are in the car dogs knows they are going tothe vet. They whine and shake all the way there. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Jack Webster
Date: 5/15/2020 11:42:00 PM
You too, Darlene!
Date: 4/29/2020 5:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I love where you say, "The collared dog awaits his master’s love and laps and licks the blessed hand above." So very true. Enjoy your day and win........
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Jack Webster
Date: 4/29/2020 6:39:00 PM
Thank you Paula!
Date: 4/29/2020 12:48:00 PM
Back for more :)
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Jack Webster
Date: 4/29/2020 2:31:00 PM
Welcome back to the wild :)
Date: 4/28/2020 7:51:00 PM
Wow. Now that is a POEM. I second Anthony's "yes". A fave. Congratulations on a most deserved top win Jack. I am chasing my tail ingesting this piece. xomo
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Jack Webster
Date: 4/28/2020 8:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen!
Date: 4/28/2020 5:38:00 PM
Love the contrast at the end! Nice! Congratulations on top win!
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Jack Webster
Date: 4/28/2020 6:52:00 PM
Thank you, Kim!
Date: 4/28/2020 5:21:00 PM
yes
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Jack Webster
Date: 4/28/2020 6:52:00 PM
Thanks, Anthony!
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