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Widowers Words

with these old hands i held you and cared for you  ~  now i'm praying for you.



For best monoku old or new poetry contest

Sponsored By Chantelle Ann Cooke. 

Written March 29th 2019


Picture number  2.

For Monoku Pick A Picture What Cha See #2  Poetry Contest

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 2:51 PM
a well deserved win, Tom. Congratulations
Cunningham Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 2:55 PM
Thank you very much Andrea, Tom
Deepa Avatar
June 23, 2020 at 6:47 AM
Wonderful saying:-) Congratulations on your win Sir. Keep writing.Keep inspiring. Take care.Warm regards~Deepa
Cunningham Avatar
June 23, 2020 at 8:31 AM
Thank you very much Deepa, I'm happy you liked it. Tom
Allison Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 7:01 PM
aww this made me well up, many congrats Tom - am seeing mum at lunchtime:-):-) hugs jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
June 23, 2020 at 3:28 AM
Thank you Jan, its so nice that you are able to see your mom again. Tom
Romios Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 5:02 PM
This is great news, I had never seen it before. Very touching, my friend Super cool that you won Panagiota. Xo
Cunningham Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 5:14 PM
Thank you Panagiota, I surprised myself, there were some brilliant entries. Tom
Watson Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 4:55 PM
What wonderful sentiments,Tom. I'm so glad that this was chosen as I'd not come across it before. Beautiful.
Cunningham Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 5:13 PM
Thank you very much Wendy. I'm happy you liked it. Hope you're well. Tom
Mishra Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 2:22 PM
Beautiful words Tom. Congratulations on your win :)
Cunningham Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 3:03 PM
Thank you very much Aditi, I'm happy you liked it. Tom
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 1:26 PM
This is beautiful Tom. Congratulations on your wonderful second place win! Blessings xxoo
Cunningham Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 1:30 PM
Thank you very much Connie, love goes on even when they have passed on. They stay in your heart and mind. Tom
Goldsmith Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 1:21 PM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful and true. A wonderful picture to go with a wonderful poem. Enjoy your win and day..........
Cunningham Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 1:28 PM
Thank you very much Paula, I'm pleased you enjoyed it. Tom
Canerdy Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 1:09 PM
Tom, this is a lovely, WINNING monoku! Janice
Cunningham Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 1:27 PM
Thank you very much Janice I'm happy you liked it. Tom
Wolf Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 9:31 PM
The hands came full circle, and you entered the winner's circle, Tom. Deservedly so with this fine write. Congrats and best wishes, Gershon
Cunningham Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 2:14 AM
Thank you very much Gershon, I'm happy you liked it. Tom.
Mcguire Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 11:59 PM
Great Win Tom
Cunningham Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 3:08 AM
Thank you Timothy. Tom.
Ashley Avatar
April 6, 2019 at 4:42 PM
How beautifully poignant and tender your monoku is, Tom. So wonderfully expressed and congratulations on your well deserved and wonderful win. Warmest wishes always, my friend.. ~Susan
Cunningham Avatar
April 6, 2019 at 6:02 PM
Thank you very much Susan I'm happy that you liked it. Tom.
Kendrick Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 6:38 AM
I have read your creative Monoku and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
Cunningham Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 7:04 AM
Thank you very much Sara, I hope you are we'll. Tom
Roper Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 1:18 PM
Very well said, my friend, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
Cunningham Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 2:14 PM
Thank you very much Eve. Tom.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 5:17 AM
Oh this is such a wonderful entry Tom. It is very deserving if your First place win! Congratulations! xxoo : )
Cunningham Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 12:39 PM
Thank you very much Connie, sadly as we all get older much of what I wrote becomes reality for many of us. Tom
Gauthier Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 10:13 PM
Lovely, Tom. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Cunningham Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 2:18 AM
Thank you very much Line. Tom
Dietrich Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 7:39 PM
oh my, this one is so poignant. Congrats on the well deserved win, Tom
Cunningham Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 2:18 AM
Thank you Andrea. Tom
May Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 3:13 PM
A touching write Tom..Congrats on your win..
Cunningham Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 3:42 PM
Thank you very much Joseph. Tom
Allison Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 2:48 PM
you touched my heart with this one Tom:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 3:41 PM
Thank you Jan, that's what couples do for each other, real love and of course we see it often. Tom
Andresen Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 1:42 PM
- Congratulations on your wonderful win, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 1:55 PM
Thank you very much Sunshine. Tom.
One Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 1:18 PM
Touching and beautiful..
Cunningham Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 3:11 PM
Thank you S.O. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 11:26 AM
Wow! Holding emotions in the palm of your hands!
Cunningham Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 3:11 PM
Thank you very much Kim. Tom.
Proxenos Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 2:01 AM
Hi Tom, Brought tears to my eyes - emotional write! Holding thumbs for you! Poetry hugs, Jenny.
Cunningham Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 4:35 AM
Thank you very much Jennifer. A sad place to be that many can relate to. Tom
Godwin Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 9:24 PM
So sad - a touching monoku that grabbed my emotions. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Cunningham Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 12:18 AM
Thank you CayCay, its so sad when someone loses a loved one .Tom
Hinshaw Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 11:11 AM
Great monoku, Tom, and a top winner for sure. Since I became a widower in Jul 2018, this was especially meaningful to me - Bob
Cunningham Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 1:23 PM
Thank you very much Robert, sadly it its something many of us will experience as we get older. Tom.
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