Wide Awake

They are called windows into the soul Open them wide and notice How you shine Within Love Grows Hidden gardens Presenting the fullness of life If you will pay close enough attention

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Heidi Sands

Date: 3/21/2018 5:59:00 PM

Very nice P.M. :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 3/16/2018 7:58:00 PM

An interesting piece. Well done, P.M... hugs :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/12/2018 10:56:00 PM

This one is growing on me, P.M...Each time I view/read it, I can combine the lines differently. It's a thoughtful, well-crafted 'modern-art-poem. ' At least for me it works that way. Bravo, maestro!

P.M. Richter
Date: 12/7/2018 12:20:00 PM

Thank you Gershon - for your kind words and for scratching beneath the surface.