Paul Marc Poet Shape

Wide Awake

They are called windows into the soul 
        Open them wide and notice
                 How you shine
                       Within
                        Love
                       Grows
                Hidden gardens
      Presenting the fullness of life
If you will pay close enough attention

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Heidi Sands March 21, 2018 at 5:59 PM Very nice P.M. :) Paul Marc March 15, 2025 at 9:10 AM Thanks again Heidi - your kind words are always appreciated :)

Akkina Downing March 16, 2018 at 7:58 PM An interesting piece. Well done, P.M... hugs :) Paul Marc March 15, 2025 at 8:42 AM Thank you Akkina!

Gershon Wolf March 12, 2018 at 10:56 PM This one is growing on me, P.M...Each time I view/read it, I can combine the lines differently. It's a thoughtful, well-crafted 'modern-art-poem. ' At least for me it works that way. Bravo, maestro! Paul Marc December 7, 2018 at 12:20 PM Thank you Gershon - for your kind words and for scratching beneath the surface.