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Wickedness Prevails

Catastrophes and war can wreak havoc on life.
Only those dealt by fate had such vivid persist. 
What still happens, don't be afraid of the sky fluff.
What might rain resemble if mists never exist? 

Was God going to punish humankind for their greed? 
Will humankind be able to cope with such tragedies?
God knows why I stayed calm in the face of the deed.
A permanent conflict among families and kids prevails.

Some relations were strong until the conflict mounted.
Some nasty unfortunates tainted them. 
As an outcome, loathing permeates their mind.
Only God can rescue us from our present problem. 

It will be as pure as a June sky, and tears will be wiped. 
The deity had saved Jonah from a whales belly. 
Thus, force Resilience is the ultimate wisdom excited 
The warmth sustains its serenity amid the storm deadly.

God will assist you in getting it ended.
As a result, you can verify why the sturdy will prevail. 
Maintain your patience throughout the recovery period.
There is no dread that the scar will heal and avail

Rekindle the delight of enabling with upkeep.

First Place Contest Winner

Written: July 14, 2021

A Brian Strand July 16 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Kim Merryman July 17, 2021 at 1:04 PM A thought provoking write, Lasaad! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Delice Arleen Skelly July 16, 2021 at 5:32 AM The first line of this poem guides the reader to ponder on your serious reflections...Delice Sotto Poet July 16, 2021 at 5:54 AM Thank you so much Delice, your kind words are always precious to me.

Rama Balasubramanian July 15, 2021 at 10:33 AM What might rain resemble if mists never exist? warmth sustains its serenity amid the storm deadly..... And many more wonderful lines make this thought provoking poem outstanding. If we have faith God surely assists. Sotto Poet July 16, 2021 at 5:55 AM Thank you very much, Rama, your kind words are so uplifting

Vijay Pandit July 15, 2021 at 6:09 AM Much thought you devoted to this, Lasaad --a poem of reflection! Sotto Poet July 16, 2021 at 5:56 AM Appreciate your kind words, Vijay. Thank you so much

Sara Kendrick July 15, 2021 at 2:34 AM Mankind or humankind seems to be going downhill but yet there are still people out there who have faith in God and try to do what is right. I know Jesus is coming to get His Church then things on this earth will get worse than they are now. As it has been said, you haven't see anything yet. It is going to horrible upon this sin cursed earth until the end of the 7 years. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara Sotto Poet July 16, 2021 at 5:57 AM Appreciate your kind words, Sara, thanks for the encouraging comment.

Victor Buhagiar July 15, 2021 at 12:54 AM In both the old testaments, God allowed men to be punished for their misdeeds. Alas, we have not learned to do God's will. Yes God can rescue us but only if we repent. Sotto Poet July 16, 2021 at 5:58 AM That's true, and actually, only God is capable of rescue humankind.

L Milton Hankins July 14, 2021 at 8:01 PM You have tied up into a neat bundle a great deal of truth in this write, Lasaad. I particularly like "Only God can rescue us..." Sotto Poet July 16, 2021 at 5:59 AM Thank you so much, Milton, your comment shed more allure to this poem.