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Wicked Witch of Time

Once upon a time Present became past Engaging in your rhyme You forgot, it wouldn’t last You abruptly awoke From an afternoon slumber Equivalent abode Different postal number You couldn’t hear the sizzle Of a simmering, dinner pot Nor was there a whistle To say the tea was hot Mother wasn’t dancing She wasn’t there at all The silence was baffling As you stumbled down the hall Your lightbulb had been changed As you knew it would, some day But the timing felt so strange Recalling so much gray At the drop of a hat, just like that Your story was Chrystal clear You worried over tit for tat Though, time, you should have feared

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Date: 1/29/2018 11:26:00 AM
Very imaginative use of words and skillfully constructed. The words are descriptive and lively, floating onto the page with a poetic hand and a brilliant wit that captures the reader's imagination and attention from the beginning and delivers to the end. Bravo my friend! Emile.
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Date: 1/28/2018 10:06:00 AM
The tooth fairy brought tomorrow's change. An homage to something so strange. A physical reminder of what it means to grow. And to one day write rhymes of what you know. Wonderful poem Anna. Forgive me for interjecting. But I just want to give a different line for your last. Learning, time, you should not fear. Just a thought. :) Peace.
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Anna Hopper
Date: 1/28/2018 3:53:00 PM
Well darn. Of course, I like yours better. Thank you
Date: 1/27/2018 6:04:00 AM
Life escapes us in a blink of an eye, I love this Anna. Hold close the memories with your kids for they grow so quickly.
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