Notes About The Poem

Yes, this is autobiographical...

Why Won'T the Tears Come

Why won't the tears come
   Why won't they fall
Did our life together
   Mean nothing at all

Our love was in bloom
   Wedding in June
A picture-perfect affair
   Magic in the air

Envisioning a new life
   in the Promised Land
Realizing shared dreams
   Milk and honey, sprinkled with sand

Changed countries so hopeful
   Lost our shirts and came back
Fought so hard to regain
   All that we lacked

Two children we raised
   Whom we lavished with praise
Their every good deed
   These blessed of our seed...

Why won't the tears come
   Why won't they fall
Did our life together
   Mean nothing at all

Somewhere, somehow
   The magic abated
No tears ever flow 
   Once you know it's ill-fated
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Ashley Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 9:57 PM
Each and every verse of your moving poem found its way into my heart, Gershon. A sadly beautiful outpouring of emotions. Your last two lines are a fitting ‘coming to terms with’ finale for your poignant piece. Warmest wishes always my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
Wolf Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 9:42 AM
Thank you for the uplifting comment, my dear friend! :) gw
Thompson Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 5:04 AM
Sad and moving poem Gershon. As usual wonderfully structured. Hope all is well. RT
Wolf Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 12:36 PM
Thanks for your encouragement, Ronald! :) gw
Krutsinger Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 11:02 PM
Wow. Deeply profound. There are no words I can add to this one. I do hope it has a happy ending eventually; many do.
Wolf Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 12:36 PM
Only happy in that I've / we've been divorced for 30 years now. Hurray! :) gw
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