Why This

im feeling done
pushing forty
nothing i want
of no majority

mind making no sense
thoughts scatter
why, common sense
whats the matter

thinking is too much
desires are not
goals no such
live, I rather not

nobody listens
nor seems to care
an unknown season
becoming hard to bare
 
a mess feeling
kinda out there
dont know the meaning
in this moment here
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Gideon Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 2:51 AM
Well what we do is keep on.Nice piece of poetry.Gidds
Tacito Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 9:20 AM
Huge emotional cluster here...ahhh the cons of love. It's only gonna make you stronger. Strong lines. Well done.
Debrosse Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 8:19 AM
This captures a real disorienting feel, there's no logic, just splattered emotional resonance
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