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Why the Listner Cries

Hearing all of your problems the big and the small in the back of her mind the listner calls for the consolment and attention you recieved just the same while the listner sits alone in her rain counting the hours the minutes, the seconds till her name is called she sits and she listens bidding her time jut waiting to see if anyone notices her sittin see's that she has her own thoughts that are spinning but no one can see her they all keep on talking spouting their problems they all keep on walking passin the listner alone in her rain leaving the listner in all of her pain. watery eyes this is why the listner cries. Copyright ©2009 Jasmine Mincey

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Date: 3/5/2009 10:37:00 AM
fantastic poem. looking forward to more of your work.
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Date: 3/5/2009 10:34:00 AM
Very sad write, I can feel your pain so strongly here, feeling invisible to the world around you. It is not a good feeling at all..You want someone to just acknowledge you being there and ask you what's wrong, to hear you and understand that you too have problems and are suffering..I can see why the listener cries..I used to be that person But I found the courage to shout and make myself heard. I hope you have also..Just remember God is listening and he cares..Call on him--God Bless*Tyesha
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