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'why the Earth Wobbles"

Internal Rhyme The Sonic of the earth’s plate tectonics was given birth By the unbalanced wobble of the earth While the wobbling of the natural earth By carnal mind invention, was given birth By the carnal act reversing Love’s intention This is how the earth reveals how Love feels About the mind’s rejection of Love’s perfection Earth reels to and fro as a drunk man on the go Now by our earth’s wobble, our earth is gobbled Recycling itself, until nothing is left Of reflected self of carnal human race With the carnal mind’s every day fast pace Purity of earth’s internal fire, in a race It will devour, the external nature The carnal nature of carnal wager Made with the man, concerning Love’s plan By Love, the Dove, giving life it’s stand Earth in it’s perfection, but mind’s rejection Which be reverse of Love’s balanced intention Previously mentioned, by man in God’s plan Continues to wobble as humans cobble The carnal mind’s extent, to it’s own intent Sowing extensions of strife, instead of life Recompensing together, disregards weather The signs of the times that lines, within the minds Of the wise virgins, of truth’s purgation From the intention, of carnal mind invention Note: Just a little something my heart gave me, explaining why our earth wobbles on it axis. I am sure some minds will think this is too simple to take serious. I am sure also our earth’s weather would be calm if it’s rotation was in balance. The mind’s logic, is it own worse enmity!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/19/2010 3:24:00 PM
enjoyed today, thansk for your comments.
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Date: 6/16/2010 7:21:00 PM
John....truth in every line....write on! jimbo
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Date: 6/16/2010 10:34:00 AM
If we live without love in our hearts the "wobbling" of our Earth will continue, dear friend. You always give us the truth and much to consider as we seek new approaches to life. This poem goes to my favorites, John. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/16/2010 3:34:00 AM
Great ideas that you have penned in this one..In Genesis 1:1-2, where it says that earth was void..I think that this is where the change took place because God was preparing earth for man..I think that before that Satan was cast down to earth and it was not a pleasant place to be..Maybe even the dinosaurs were the Devil's creation but God used them for good..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 6/13/2010 10:37:00 PM
i believe john there is great wisdom in simplicity, this is an awesome poem, enjoy reading your poems, harry
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Date: 6/13/2010 7:54:00 PM
I think that teacher would have found this a little to good for that 6th grader. I love science and my son and I would debate over topics like the earths axis and what can happen. Interesting poem. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 6/13/2010 4:08:00 PM
Anomynous... I think this poem is great:D it helped me out for my science project, im in 6th grade, and i WAS DYING FOR A POEM! thank god i found this one:) "This is a comment I got on another site, where I also have this poem posted under a different title.""
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