Secrets Inyoureyes Poet Rhyme

Why Poem

WHY POEM.

Why does time never stop,miss?
Why do people feel sad?
Why are you always being chased by cops,miss?
Why do you make me feel bad?

Why do you never visit us anymore,dad?
Why do you never stop working?
Why do you hate when I sing,dad?
Why do you never stop smirking?

Why do you always swear,mum?
Why do you call me stupid?
Why do you act like a bear,mum?
Why do you hate Cupid?

Why do leaves always fall off trees,miss?
Why do you never answer my questions?
Why are you always chasing bees,miss?
Why Do you like depression?

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Richard Lamoureux December 14, 2017 at 8:26 AM This is really good, it is unfortunate you stopped posting because you have talent. Let me know if you start posting again.

Paul Callus August 28, 2014 at 8:17 AM Hi Talicia! Pleased to make your acquaintance through this introductory poem of yours on Soup. Your 'why' poem asks many questions, but don't we all yearn to know the answers to many things? Your last question has left me thinking.....take care. // paul Secrets Inyoureyes December 20, 2014 at 4:36 AM thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. :)

Poet Destroyer A August 24, 2014 at 11:41 AM Talicia:) Thank you for the nice reply on my comment <3 LINDA

Poet Destroyer A August 14, 2014 at 9:44 PM Talicia, stopping by to read and enjoy your poem once again. :) Congratulations, on having your poem featured on the Poetry Soup's Home Page..... Always & Forever ~LINDA

Craig Glenister August 13, 2014 at 3:07 AM Love your honesty Talicia..especially the last line..good poem Craig Glenister August 13, 2014 at 3:17 AM You also may notice that your comment about my poem I am Nothing..made me change one word. Thank you for that :) Secrets Inyoureyes August 13, 2014 at 3:09 AM Thank you

Jerry T Curtis August 11, 2014 at 4:31 PM Very interesting last line---based on my own personal struggle with depression, I believe the true danger of depression, is that it becomes your friend and if you are clever enough to realize it's not, you can free yourself. Great write TM Secrets Inyoureyes August 13, 2014 at 3:10 AM Thank you and yes that is very true

Michael J Lewis August 11, 2014 at 3:42 PM A very effective poem. Simple questions that carry significant resonances of layers of feeling. Secrets Inyoureyes August 13, 2014 at 3:10 AM Thanks

Scott Thirtyseven August 11, 2014 at 9:57 AM The last line is a knocker. Love that first stanza more-so however, a fun read. Secrets Inyoureyes August 13, 2014 at 3:10 AM :D

Phumlani Mthethwa August 11, 2014 at 7:16 AM I have a lot of questions that remain unanswered just like yours. I just hope as we continue this journey called life, these questions will inevitably be answered. Thanks for sharing Secrets Inyoureyes August 13, 2014 at 3:09 AM Thanks for reading and commenting.

Teddy Kimathi August 11, 2014 at 6:16 AM I really love your innocent questions, with a beautiful philosophical ring to it! ^_^ Welcome to Poetrysoup; I will sure be eager to read more from you! ^_^ Regards, Teddy. Secrets Inyoureyes August 11, 2014 at 6:18 AM Thanks

Richard Lamoureux August 10, 2014 at 9:10 AM This is indeed sad, I hope happy answers are revealed to you. Growing up in an abusive home I was always told what a dark place the world was and after enough time I came to believe it. I had an uncle tell me the world was not the horrible place my dad said it was and I began to see it in a different way. Welcome to a happy place.

Verlena S. Walker August 10, 2014 at 6:58 AM Welcome to Poetry Soup Talicia... You will inspire I perceive from this philosophical write.. You ask all the right questions... Verlena sends a big smile and a welcome hug! Secrets Inyoureyes August 10, 2014 at 7:12 AM Thank you

Carol Eastman August 9, 2014 at 11:40 AM A sad poem... Yet I found it very good and interesting. Well done! Welcome to PoetrySoup. If you click on a name or avatar... You will be taken to their poetry. If you leave a comment, then they will have a permanent link back to your poetry. Secrets Inyoureyes August 10, 2014 at 7:11 AM Thanks

Anne-Lise Andresen August 7, 2014 at 8:23 AM - Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Talicia :) - I choose your first great written free verse :) - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Secrets Inyoureyes August 7, 2014 at 8:23 AM Thanks

Craig Glenister August 7, 2014 at 6:40 AM Questions are wonderful Talicia..more important than answers...because only you can answer these questions. Secrets Inyoureyes August 7, 2014 at 7:06 AM Thanks

Poet Destroyer A August 7, 2014 at 6:18 AM Good questions life is hard, Talicia,,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@ Secrets Inyoureyes August 7, 2014 at 6:27 AM Thanks,this is actually homework I got from my teacher.