Why Not

W hen you tell me you love me I blow up inside
H ow ever you wont go out with me because she likes me
Y our dumb

N ever did I think you would reject me
O my god now you beg for pardon
T o me your still the love of my life but never again will I ask you out

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/9/2009 7:28:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week. But, wouldn't you reconsider if she wised up? ...if she is the love of your life. Be Blessed.
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Date: 4/9/2009 5:18:00 PM
don't you hate it when that happens. great write.
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Date: 4/8/2009 8:33:00 PM
Josh - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj
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Date: 4/8/2009 6:55:00 PM
Great write-congrulations on being featured this week-your fellow souper-Rhonda kay
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Date: 4/7/2009 4:08:00 PM
Great write Josh, congratulations on being featured, I'm so proud of you, you write with such feeling. Loved it. Love, Aleera
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Date: 4/6/2009 7:41:00 PM
Wow thats some tough stuff right there......Amazing though
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Date: 4/6/2009 4:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your feature of the week..GB, Always, Tyesha
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Date: 4/6/2009 4:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 4/6/2009 1:25:00 PM
Congrats on your featured write! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/6/2009 1:23:00 PM
Wow! That's pretty intense. Your piece speaks of a lot of pain. It's a brilliant work of both sorrow and anger.
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Date: 4/6/2009 12:08:00 PM
Congrats on your feature of the week...Raul
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Date: 4/6/2009 10:44:00 AM
Congratulations on having you poetr featured this week. This one speaks with the pain of unrequited love. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/6/2009 5:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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