Josh Torres Poet Acrostic

Why Not

W hen you tell me you love me I blow up inside
H ow ever you wont go out with me because she likes me
Y our dumb

N ever did I think you would reject me
O my god now you beg for pardon
T o me your still the love of my life but never again will I ask you out

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen April 9, 2009 at 7:28 PM Congratulations on being featured this week. But, wouldn't you reconsider if she wised up? ...if she is the love of your life. Be Blessed.

Alley Poe April 9, 2009 at 5:18 PM don't you hate it when that happens. great write.

Michael Jordan April 8, 2009 at 8:33 PM Josh - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj

Rhonda Hero Aka Hero-Wilson April 8, 2009 at 6:55 PM Great write-congrulations on being featured this week-your fellow souper-Rhonda kay

Aleera De La Keur April 7, 2009 at 4:08 PM Great write Josh, congratulations on being featured, I'm so proud of you, you write with such feeling. Loved it. Love, Aleera

Ellia Fields April 6, 2009 at 7:41 PM Wow thats some tough stuff right there......Amazing though

Tyesha Ehigiator April 6, 2009 at 4:46 PM Congratulations on your feature of the week..GB, Always, Tyesha

Laura Mckenzie April 6, 2009 at 4:43 PM Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)

Sharon Winter April 6, 2009 at 1:25 PM Congrats on your featured write! Love, Shar

Brandee Augustus April 6, 2009 at 1:23 PM Wow! That's pretty intense. Your piece speaks of a lot of pain. It's a brilliant work of both sorrow and anger.

Raul Moreno April 6, 2009 at 12:08 PM Congrats on your feature of the week...Raul

Lena Townsend April 6, 2009 at 10:44 AM Congratulations on having you poetr featured this week. This one speaks with the pain of unrequited love. Smiles from Lolita

Carol Sunshine Brown April 6, 2009 at 5:57 AM Congratulations on your awesome poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol