Why Me Lord

Why Me Lord

And yet, when I saw his silhouette,
Was lost with silent darkness, I regret;
Like Moon in sky am pale but sound
With him wanted to get off the ground.

The figure in the dark did become lost
Moon with yellow was modestly embossed
And know my love for him now is lost in time,
His love is no more which once was sublime.

The sky above me, slowly brightens,
Each star disappears which sky whitens 
In my heart still feel his love for me
Strings of desire are sadness no longer ecstasy.

Our love has stop being in the landscape,
Sun dries tear drops as each one will drape
My forehead as I snapped and he did desperately cry;
I responded, "Give me hope on that I can rely."

By Someone else who I am looking for their name.
This is my interpretation from another language.
Jim Horn
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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March 20, 2015 at 7:24 AM
"A" your comments always are adorable while my poems are probably deplorable. Kidding of course, I think. Right, God? Jim Horn
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March 20, 2015 at 7:30 AM
Good heavens. Do I still have to reply to my very own self also?
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March 20, 2015 at 6:19 AM
Excellent pen Jim! I enjoyed your piece. A 7 from me!Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :) D.
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March 20, 2015 at 7:28 AM
Dorian, Good heavens. I commented in the wrong box. Can you still read it about "A?" Jim Horn
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March 20, 2015 at 7:26 AM
Now that you enjoyed my piece, Hope poetry reading will increase. Jim Horn
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