Why Me By Anna Lo P

When I met you, I asked you
Why me? Why me? Why me?
Is there any reason for you 
to love someone like me.

You said "Never mind reasons"
And I felt maybe that's the reason
A reason for no reasons I want to hear
A reason I wouldn't fear.

And I asked myself those too
What is there about me? 
That something that he liked 
and hopefully he might pursue.

I'm not pretty, nothing to love
I'm not sexy, nothing to love
I'm not young, nothing to love
I'm not even his own kind, nothing to love.

So what is there about me?
Something which made him to like me?
Just a regular ordinary lady
Maybe I'm a girl that's extraordinary.

I'm funny, something to love
I'm naughty, something to love
Im a crying baby, something to love
I'm a sweety, something to love
I'm caring, something to love
I'm thoughtful,something to love
I'm smart, something to love
I'm a one fine lady, someone to love
I'm extraordinary, someone to love
I'm a Once in Lifetime Woman, you must love. 

But you're not around anymore
And can't hear this paramore, no more 
I still ask myself if there could be more
So you can love me, am I such a bore?..:(

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/15/2012 5:26:00 AM
Hey, lovely write Anna! I like the way you started with the attributes that seem missing an then developed it to the qualities that are present. And the twist at the end -nice, sad but nice.
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Date: 10/15/2012 6:18:00 AM
Hello Ms. Vicky..thanks again for your wonderful comment. I'm not really a pro when it comes to poetry, I didnt even understand the terminologies of wrting/poetry.. anyways, still I was able to contribute in my own little way to PoetrySoup...have a good day Mam..:)
Date: 10/14/2012 8:04:00 PM
ANNA, your poem is awesome, thank you for sharing your pen.. always :-) PD
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Date: 10/14/2012 8:43:00 PM
Thank you so Much Ms. PD..my works can never be compared to such talents like you and the rest..I have read your works and they're great..I will be inspired by them, but for the meantime, I'll do my best to contribute a little something of "Me" and what I feel in each & every phase of my life..:D
Date: 10/14/2012 7:07:00 AM
lovely.....
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Date: 10/14/2012 7:18:00 AM
Thank you Vrushani..even I can't believe I just wrote that in less than 20mins (right after doing my laundry :) )..anyways..if someone feels the need to write and is inspired, time doesn't count..not even these tired arms..:D
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