Why Me

17 very young Been through so much Life has hardly begun Brother has diabeties He's almost died Grandma just died Always baby sittin When i was young I wanted to be hunged Only because i didnt want to face life No one was ever nice I've been called names I played to many games Than I ask my self Why Why me so very young am i the only one And a hole lot more ....... Don't feel like sharing but its in another poem

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/1/2010 7:16:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, and lots of inspiration Janae. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/30/2010 5:23:00 PM

well, keep up writing. It really helps to release your emotions by writing them down. I love how you did those last two lines of your first stanza, kind of wrapping back around to the question: why me so very young am i the only one! luv, Andrea