Why I Should Win 1st Place

Straight from the heart I sling 'em
Right from the gut, I bring 'em
   Why fiddle with metaphor or meter
   I actually stir the heart of the reader  


        March 04, 2019
Entry in "I am a winner" contest
      Sponsor: Bobby May
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Messina Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 8:12 PM
...and indeed you do, Gershon. Good one dear friend. Hoping all is well...Charlie
Wolf Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 9:33 AM
Charlie, if ever I have stirred your heart, I am happy that you have let me know. Greatly appreciated! Best wishes, Gershon
Romios Avatar
March 8, 2019 at 2:26 PM
Congratulations, GW Panagiota
Wolf Avatar
March 9, 2019 at 9:17 PM
Hey, thank you so much for noticing, Panagiota! :) gw
May Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 9:47 AM
It's about time you won something Gershon, lol Congratulations on your 1st Place win!
Wolf Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 8:58 PM
You're so right, Bobby... Now about that $350 you've requested (ha, ha): Do you take monopoly money? ~ gw
Y. Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 9:24 AM
Hi Gershon, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on a well deserved win:-) Alexis
Cunningham Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 7:19 AM
You won for free, I'm gutted I had to send him $400.00 lol.
Wolf Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 8:54 PM
Tom, think of that $400 as a down payment for when Bobby pays you the going rate for your next contest. LOL. ~ Gershon
Krutsinger Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 3:59 AM
"why fiddle with metaphor or meter" - I am in love with this line!
Wolf Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 8:55 PM
It's the artist in you! (or perhaps the musician!). Thanks, Caren
Y. Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 8:20 PM
WoW! Gershon, I think Bobby will like this one. Slam dunk! Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
Wolf Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 8:22 PM
I hope so. My contest entries have fared rather dismally lately. Thanks a lot for the encouragement, Alexis! :) gw
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