Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

Why I Love Trouble

Sometimes trouble has a mask...
     Behind a cloud there could be a sun for you to bask...                                     
        When trouble found me I felt like I was climbing
                        out of a box that was round...
          Then I closed my eyes and what was once trouble
                         was now a beautiful sound...
           Look close and don't be to quick to judge a face...     
                    Sometimes trouble has a better taste...

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Deb Radke April 17, 2012 at 2:15 PM Hello Michael -- I like this poem very much. The last line is most intriguing. It makes me wonder, leaves me hanging a bit and wanting more of your words about the 'taste of trouble'. It was nice to hear from you. Thank you for your comments on my poetry. I hope you are well. It was a pleasure to read some of your work today. Love, Deb

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer March 22, 2012 at 5:46 PM Michael this is great-love the ending-just brilliant!

Charmaine Chircop March 19, 2012 at 3:36 AM Sometimes its double trouble behind the su n that basks there is a hell to burn :).. But other times behind the face there's an angel just as well :)..Enjoyed your poetry..your Charmasaurus friend :)Charma!!!

Broken Butterfly March 17, 2012 at 7:23 AM Love the theme of your rhyme Michael, it is so true. I want to thank you for my placement in your I'm More Contest. I am overwhelmed and so happy you liked my poem and thanks Michael for all your comments and support of my poetry.

Nathan D. March 13, 2012 at 5:49 AM sometimes? i thought trouble always had a better taste nice write

Kabuteng P.Ink K. March 12, 2012 at 11:09 AM Hi Michael! I definitely like what you say here about trouble--indeed it can bring out something good in people-- I loved your perspective on it :) Enjoyed this very much and I read your comments to me. Aww shucks, you make my heart glow, you know? See now I am rhyming?You are too kind...thank you for saying what you said and again for your blog and I am glad to be able to have touched your heart in some way, you also touch mine. Thank you hugs :).

Kyle Kriticos March 11, 2012 at 2:18 PM Very well written MIchael good job on the excusing of trouble lol :P

Wilma Neels March 11, 2012 at 1:51 PM Interesting thoughts you convey here Michael, love W

Anne-Lise Andresen March 10, 2012 at 4:54 PM Well Michael....you have written it, and I am totally agree with you.:) - oxox love Anne-Lise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 10, 2012 at 9:25 AM an excrellent write Michael luv on the do's and don't of life itself.. troublesome people will always try to get others to join in their misery.. but.. lovers rule this Planet so they are defeated before they start to try .. wonderful words of great passion.. JG also in passion mode.. forever and always .. xoxoxo

Carol Eastman March 10, 2012 at 8:39 AM Facinating topic... Very unique and inspirational.

Tracy Edwards March 10, 2012 at 6:57 AM Lol..Awesome Michael.. Trouble is as trouble does :D xxx Michael J. Falotico March 10, 2012 at 7:20 AM lol so true :)