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Why Him

You talk about him everyday You think he's yours You think that you own him You DON'T I try to keep quiet I try not to say anything I try to forget him He isn't mine I don't own him I won't Why cant we just talk? I'm afraid Why is it always about him? Why him?

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Skat A

Date: 5/9/2013 9:31:00 PM

Emma, your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"

John Posey

Date: 5/5/2013 4:37:00 AM

Emma, my dear, this post will provide fodder for many verses. This was well written, with bitter ink.... Well done.... I will read more..... Love ya... Jake

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/4/2013 8:25:00 PM

WOW! this is bad feeling poem Emma, the expressions cut. However, I enjoyed the poem , Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. If you like, please consider checking out my contest in the future. SOME ARE FUN : -) You can find the contest page by clicking on the top left hand side. You will find many different contests to choose from. I’m looking forward in reading and following your poems right now and the future. If you ever want or need feedback on a certain poem, please look me up. I can't wait to read what you highly recommend. You can always stop by and say hi if you like. Keep me posted when you post your next poem…. Thank you ~ Always & Forever *LINDA