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Why Her and Not Me

When i saw you my heart beat sped up when you hugged me i felt like i was gonna melt we laughed so hard we were having such a great time! But then you brought up....her. dont you know how much you hurt me? you said you loved me you say you still do but you're with HER! Today if felt like we were together i cant help but love you, everything about you i just love I'll never forget today or our first kiss even if it feels like it was our last i love you and always will hopefully you will too...

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Date: 6/17/2011 10:19:00 AM
Lovely passionate flow of feelings of love, Amber
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Date: 6/17/2011 1:08:00 AM
The trials and tribulations of young love run right through this poem. Most of us have been there. It can be hard, but the vast majority of us do come through the fire without being too badly burned. Poignant write.
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