Why Full-Fledged Men Behave Like Steel

WHY FULL-FLEDGED MEN BEHAVE LIKE STEEL

Men; though corpulent and full-fleshed,
We still break down and lose form.
A woman is expressive and detailed. Yes!
But men? Can't be said of a lot of them. Yeah, most definitely and absolutely undebatable!
Why we don't tell you about our day at work?
Bcos we don't want you to know that we work too hard 
yet make too little compared to you or your friends.
We do not want you to worry and transmit to the kids.
After 10 hours work day or more, we come back home,

try to fix what needs to fixing without complaining
even if it cost us our health or comfort
bcos we do not want you to feel we can't handle it,
so that you trust us to think we've got it under control.
Men can be strong or stone-hearted at times 
but women get overwhelmed a lot bcos of their work load. 
Oh really? Well, that could be true too!
But here is a living and naked truth:
We don't let you see us get overwhelmed 
Cos we want you to feel everything is okay

so that you could be comfortable and be at peace. 
But it definitely does get overwhelming sometimes.
It's not manly to spend time in the shower, Mr Man! 
Hmm...why we take a long shower sometimes?
Truth is, sometimes that's where we let it all out;
The pain, the disappointment, the hurt and the weight,
sometimes that's where we don't withhold our tears,
so that nobody will see us or hear us when we cry.
Tho responsibilities & expectations stay high, 
just know that men still try...but men also cry.


VICK MANUEL POETRY {VMP}
FORM: Didactic 
Copyright ©? August 2023.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Lawless Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 7:00 AM
TOUCHE'!!
Immanuel Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 3:13 PM
Thanks John
Severo Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 10:21 PM
Nice
Immanuel Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 3:13 PM
Thank you Aurore
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