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03/30/24

Inspired by song

Why don't you stay ?
Glenn Hughes

 

Contest by Robert James Ligouri

 

Why Don't You Stay ? Had you ever loved me, Dear ! Then why don't you stay ? I looked straight to your eyes : Your eyes glistened.. But I failed to descry my reflection in your eyes. You walked away leaving me confused. Have you ever loved me ,Dear ! Then why don't you stay ? Why you stepped hesitant ? My eager ears waited to listen something. You neither talked nor listened, Just passed! Not sure whether you turned back for a while. I can't stop you from going away ! Why don't you stay ! Had you ever loved me ? Then why you hurried to reach me at dusty dusk ! I stretched my hand to welcome. You didn't hold but went away. Not sure, whether you wobbled or ignored ! Why don't you stay? Had you ever loved me ! When you appeared in misty night I dreamed to be in your arms but you just glanced and left. Why don't you stay ? Have you ever loved me ? I am carrying my ache throughout life ! ' Cause I had loved you. Why don't you stay ? I can't stop you from going away. Can't we stay together ? Please don't go away.

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Date: 3/30/2024 10:06:00 AM
Beautiful, Anisha! A great poetic question!
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 3/30/2024 10:34:00 AM
Thanks Kim for quick visit and appreciation.Love.

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