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Why Don'T You Notice I Love You

if i gave you money you would ask for more if i died to save you you would ask what for its because i love you god dam but its you who does not see that through all your dark times there was always me lied for you yesterday told them it was me now im sitting in detention sad as sad can be you say thanks for the chocolate and you walk away from me it hurts my heart so much that you barley notice me

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Date: 8/27/2014 4:54:00 AM
In reality think I would move on from this guy - great write - you need to change barley to barely xx hugs jan xx
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Tracey Lawrence
Date: 8/27/2014 4:56:00 AM
thank you xxx and you are correct. thanks for your support
Date: 8/27/2014 1:49:00 AM
Well written.Enjoyed the whole plot and Scheme.
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Tracey Lawrence
Date: 8/27/2014 3:05:00 AM
thank you very much xxx

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