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Why Don'T You Notice I Love You

if i gave you money you would ask for more 
if i died to save you 
you would ask what for


its because i love you god dam 
but its you who does not see 
that through all your dark times 
there was always me 

lied for you yesterday 
told them it was me 
now im sitting in detention 
sad as sad can be 
you say thanks for the chocolate 
and you walk away from me 
it hurts my heart so much 
that you barley notice me

Copyright © Tracey Lawrence | Year Posted 2014

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Jan Allison Date: 8/27/2014 4:54:00 AM In reality think I would move on from this guy - great write - you need to change barley to barely xx hugs jan xx Login to Reply Tracey Lawrence Date: 8/27/2014 4:56:00 AM thank you xxx and you are correct. thanks for your support

M. Shahid H. Chouhdry Date: 8/27/2014 1:49:00 AM Well written.Enjoyed the whole plot and Scheme. Login to Reply Tracey Lawrence Date: 8/27/2014 3:05:00 AM thank you very much xxx