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Why Don'T You Care

Why Don'T You Care Why dont you care the way I feel, Most time oh yeah! my world stood still. Why don't you care the way I look, is It because the steps I took? why dont you care! are you here? but not really there! The love I give is true and rear, The one you give is so unfear. Why !or mabey you just dont care. Why dont you care the times I cry, Is it because the fear of lost? Or is it my hopes have lost. Why do I feel so alone, lost and insane? Why does my heart bears so much pain. Why don't you care who catch the rain, And watch the birds on my window pane. Why don't you care to sing a tune The only song my ears may learn. Why don't you care to see me smile, A kiss goodnight can go a mile. It's fair to say no one knows why, Only time will tell as days pass by. Bernadine Isaac

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Date: 9/23/2010 5:22:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Bernadine. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/23/2010 1:51:00 AM
Can feel the indifference and the hurt.
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Date: 9/22/2010 6:08:00 PM
VERY HEARTFELT AND DEEP
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Date: 9/22/2010 12:24:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. luv your creative write.. soup offers many contests.. check them out to enter and good luck with luv...
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Date: 9/22/2010 8:25:00 AM
Very creative and interesting thoughts penned well, Bernaadine
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