Why Do You Judge Me?

look at the girl drowning herself with the vodka and booze

like the city winter on the methane gas

and most of the guys would pass

its the the color in your eyes

they scare away the other guys

with the i dont care stare

with your twisted and matted hair

heavy on the blush and heavier on the flair

seeing no way through

her life was broken and screwed

if it wasnt for the vodka and booze

she would see the what and the who

but it wasnt the booze

and it wasnt the coke

it wasnt the pressure that made her smoke

i can see it in her eyes

just behind the clouded jade

the sad story between a father and daughter

 

he loved her but she did not

and her ignorance made him so hot

a sinful lust which he could not bear to stop

he snuck up the stairs like the bad cop

he heard her cry but in her sleep she cry

he grabbed her and whispered in her ear "kiss your virginity goodbye"

but then she butted his head

then she kicked and wailed him right off the bed

you coulda sworn she was black

then she heard it (crack!)

the body fell right to the floor

and the police standing at the door

she cried he would not stop!

hugging his body paying no attention to the cop

he loved me forever

and under her breath with the quivering lip

but i killed him and won't forget him ever...

 

so here is the bich

drinking pitch after pitch

not giving one care or the other

only having one after the other

do you still care to judge her

did you ever ask why it was

every time you got near she would cuse!

so the question is who's the bigger bich?

the girl who got screwed over because life is unfair!

or you who judges with no care your jacket and strait hair!

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don't judge even if the treatment is unfair you don't know what they have gone through

there is no good in judging somebody and things never seem to get better.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/22/2010 8:43:00 PM
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