Get Your Premium Membership

Why Do You Come Here?

Forced awake. Eyes defiant to the core. Know now my name. My nature is abstruse... Why do you come here? Solitude best suited, My call haughtily heard. You point your crooked finger, My Nature is abstruse... Why do you come here? Stubbornness only matched by your ego, Iron Clad Pestilence. You know not of the land you walk on. My Nature is abstruse... Why do you come here? Heed my call, Huitzilopochtli. Steel crashes and falls. My concerns lye with my children. I retreat into solace... My nature no longer abstruse.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/7/2010 4:57:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jamie. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 10/6/2010 10:30:00 AM
I am glad that you are no longer Greek to me but understandable..Must be an aggressive wild person to whom you are addressing this poem....Sara
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things