Per Writers Digest 168 poetic forms this type of poem is known as a Sedoka. Japanese form two 3 line stanzas 5-7-7 syllable count in each stanza and is considered a question then an answer poem between lovers.
I always felt safe with you beside me my love why did you abandon me? I had to leave you my love was consumed by you I had nothing left for me
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