Why Cant I Just Dye Already?!

I wanna slice my throat


                 Make me believe that you loved me when you didnt


                                                                     This isnt fair when I havent loved in soo long


                      I wanna take this rope and hang it from a tree


And let myself hang from it



                                             I am Done with This messed Up life!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Loving Iii Avatar
May 16, 2009 at 8:26 AM
when you grow up and have a daughter JUST like you, then you'll want to die. because nothing you do makes her happy! your truly ungreatfull. and i'm totally bored by it. do it by your self.
Loveless Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 6:04 AM
I think you could very well, and very easily take this further and make it into a beautiful,, soul sick, broken hearted, piece of art. Please think about contuining it. Angel Rose
Mckenzie Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 11:32 AM
Ah strong emotions and strong actions as well! Well done I felt all your frustration! Laura :) Peace!
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