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Why Are Fish Blinded To the Deck

A Carp Makes a Rash choice With what it eats. Attracted at times to Gobble slimy worms that Hang on a rusted hook that Leads to being pulled on deck, For its’eventual demise. It makes You wonder why it never recognized The string that was attached to that hook That caught it in its’grasp as a trap. Swimming in blue waters of a Better choices to put inside Its’ mouth that are full And healthy for all Its’needs. But still swims blind and Towards dark dead bait that Hang on sharpest Hooks to pull Then die.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/14/2011 9:47:00 PM
FISHING! Nice poem and thank you for the rude comments a while back! :D I'll do better as a poet in no time.
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