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Why???????

What did i do for you to break my heart in two my love for you will never die my tears will fall hitting the darkened floor the blood that fills my bed of dreams there will be no screams as i lay limp and alone my heart will turn to stone i will return one day i pray the nightwalker 6thoct 2010

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Geetika Aswal

Date: 10/10/2010 11:02:00 PM

beautiful poem.It happens to all of us.Really nice.

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 10/10/2010 4:10:00 PM

Hi Duncan.I like this.Another emotional piece,sad,a beautiful sadness though.May I ask -The Nightwalker-I see this quite often in your work.Is it a recurring theme?If you don't mind me asking could you explain.Or is it some elusive figure you use to add mystery to your words?I'd also like to thank you for so many kind comments on my own submits. luv June(Sylvia)

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/10/2010 1:22:00 PM

I am just now finding your 'nightwalker poetry'. You have a deepness, and a sad quality, to your words. Quite an emotional piece...as are the others. Well done. Welcome to the soup, Duncan, and thanks so much for your interest in my poems, each comment was very kind, I am grateful! :)

Sarah Hales

Date: 10/8/2010 6:43:00 AM

this is great full of emotion ...enjoyed sarah x

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 10/6/2010 2:42:00 PM

Wow Duncan this is deep and painful. I feel your pain dude. Welcome to the soup. Any question don't hesitate.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/6/2010 10:43:00 AM

Interesting emotions expressed..Sara