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Why cant you see me Am I really that invisible Im right here in plain site Why cant you see I think Were meant to be

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 3/24/2009 11:22:00 AM
Nice work, on the last line I think you meant we're meant to be. As in we are not were. Hope you have a great day...Raul
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Date: 12/17/2008 11:12:00 AM
nice poem anna.iloved it:-)...raven
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Date: 12/12/2008 9:45:00 AM
A piognant poem that toches the heart. Wishing you and yours a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 12/12/2008 5:45:00 AM
like it Anna thanx for the comment.
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