Why

Why cant you see me
Am I really that invisible
Im right here in plain site
Why cant you see I think 
Were meant to be
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Moreno Avatar
March 24, 2009 at 11:22 AM
Nice work, on the last line I think you meant we're meant to be. As in we are not were. Hope you have a great day...Raul
Carr Avatar
December 17, 2008 at 11:12 AM
nice poem anna.iloved it:-)...raven
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December 12, 2008 at 9:45 AM
A piognant poem that toches the heart. Wishing you and yours a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
Haniff Avatar
December 12, 2008 at 5:45 AM
like it Anna thanx for the comment.
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