Nick Trim Poet Rhyme

Why

Why stay alive when you've got suicide,
why stay alive when you've died inside,
why would you try when you've got no pride,
why live a life that has nothing to gift,
why carry on when it feels so wrong.

What is the point, what is the why?

There is a peace to death, a reason to die.

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Darlene De Beaulieu July 11, 2018 at 5:55 PM Hello Nick Trim as i was reading your poem I had a sense of depression from you as I read this poem. I hope you feel better now. have a nice evening my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu July 13, 2018 at 2:44 PM That does make sense to me. Have a nice day my friend. Nick Trim July 13, 2018 at 8:29 AM thanks Darlene, it's a case of taking the rough with the smooth

Lyric Man July 11, 2018 at 6:24 AM Unless death is a doorway and the God of the other side said don't come through this door through suicide.. just a thought Nick Trim July 11, 2018 at 4:18 PM I try to document the feeling when i'm at my lowest to help others who may not be able to find the words to explain, maybe they read this and say that's how I feel and then they might be helped or understood