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Whspers of Light

Tickled with wet prisms Cocooned with the dead head of trees Synchronized in natures rhythms Her skin dancing with shadows in a breeze Good morning Misses Sun Inhaling the exhalants of the plants Worries has she? None. In spring showers she does gallivant. After noon parade of Clouds What stories in shapes do you bring me? I see you’re not in lack of drought I do love the song of thunder you sing me So soon Mister Moon I’m ready for the spotlight summons Rolling in your dark doom The now dry sky cries diamonds How I love the day How I love the Night More than I can ever say Mmm Whispers of the light. -B. Maxine 2/7/2014

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James Horn

Date: 8/22/2014 6:01:00 AM

World's revolution is controlled by God's gravitation, While world if filled with His satiation, So instead of you just standing clear, Get involved and always try to be close and near. Jim Horn

James Horn

Date: 8/5/2014 8:23:00 AM

Silence Somewhere To only itself will silence speak And may sound rather weak Never, ever will hear it at all Doesn't care who it will appall. Rushing in silence may often try But now has gone and passed by No longer again will it ever last Has become of the previous past Silence so stern where have you been When I was trying to let you in I still never know where you are Have you sought silence from a star? James Thomas Horn Retired Veteran

James Horn

Date: 8/5/2014 8:07:00 AM

As soft whispers while away the light. You know something? You and I are great poets even there are those out there who might not want to admit it. There is much depth and meaning to your poems. Would be interesting if you were on YouTube reading them out loud. Wonder how you could do it. Jim Horn

James Horn
Date: 8/22/2014 5:54:00 AM

Dear Maximum Revolution, Obtain a tape recorder or have one installed on your computer. Record your poem and play it back to yourself. I really should try this myself some day. Sounds like another one of my great ideas. Did you per chance read my August 16th Poem of the Day? Would like your opinion. Jim Horn

B. Maxine Revolution
Date: 8/22/2014 12:36:00 AM

Sorry for the late response and for the lovely comments. As far as reading it aloud it's something I've been really considering! Again thank you for encouraging and soulful comments!

James Horn

Date: 8/5/2014 8:01:00 AM

http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/best/33466/james_horn I have become entranced by your poems and will continue on. You and I are part of the few rhyming poets left. Jim Horn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/30/2014 5:34:00 PM

B MAXINEA, beautiful poem and win, :) Congratulations..... XOX ~ LINDA

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/27/2014 12:08:00 PM

Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

Donna Jones

Date: 3/26/2014 7:13:00 PM

This is lovely....congratulations on the win

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/26/2014 10:04:00 AM

as soulful as it can get, maxine.. big cheers on your top win... huggs

Dominique Johnson

Date: 2/20/2014 11:56:00 PM

Loved it! One of my favorites

Kelly Deschler

Date: 2/8/2014 5:11:00 PM

I enjoyed the wonderful imagery in this carefree, and somewhat whimsical poem. A beautiful write, B. Maxine!...Thank you for the great comments. I appreciate it very much.