Who's That Mystery Man

There's a man of mystery
That all children try and see
Bringing toys and presents too
The good boys and sweet girls who
Don't cause trouble through the years
Acting nicer as he nears
Dressed in furry white and red
While little ones sleep in their beds
Dreaming of all the great treasures
This jolly man leaves with pleasure
Trying not to be to slow
He has a long way to go
Sliding up and down all night
Chimneys that make the white
On his outfit black with ash
In his sleigh he makes a dash
Flying in the cold night air
In the sky with his reindeer
That helps him travel the world
Leaving every boy and girl
Presents from his magic bag
That will empty and soon sag
Because its not full again
A bearded man who's a friend
Brings cheer, joy and lots of love
From the moonlit skies above
One night each year he will fly
On rooftops he'll surely try
Being silent as can be
To remain a mystery
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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That Archaic Poet Avatar
December 20, 2013 at 5:43 AM
Nuh-uh! I'M the Mystery Man! It's ME! LOL! But Shhhhhhhh! Don't tell anyone! Didn't it suck to find out as kids that Santa isn't real? What a bummer that was! Fun read, Sweet Pea! :)
Boskovski Avatar
December 17, 2013 at 4:49 PM
I am the mystery Man!! lol Oh I love this poem! Very well written poem! :) great write my dear Robin! :) xoxo
Guzzi Avatar
December 17, 2013 at 9:39 AM
Thank you, a very enjoyable verse for a snowy day! Light & Love
Sergi Avatar
December 16, 2013 at 8:04 PM
Hey Robin very good one here. Did you enter it in the contest??
Carroll Avatar
December 16, 2013 at 7:29 PM
Hi Robin, A well crafted yuletide write.. Ken
Andresen Avatar
December 16, 2013 at 4:30 PM
- A enjoyable poem, Robin - I wish you and everyone you love a enjoyable Christmas. - All the best to you!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2013 at 3:08 PM
very nicely done. Is it for Deb's contest. I can see a winner here!
Peterson Avatar
December 16, 2013 at 9:17 AM
Mysterious indeed! I first believe in Santa (though he was mysterious); then I lost my faith and got all cluttered up with material things. Life's simpler now, and once again, I believe. I enjoyed this poem so much. Very evocative and born of truth.
Deschler Avatar
December 15, 2013 at 11:09 PM
A wonderful poem about that mysterious and illusive Santa Claus! Fantastic writing, Robin! I very much enjoyed reading this poem tonight!...Thank you so much for the great comments!
Kelley Avatar
December 15, 2013 at 5:16 PM
Normally I really don't like rhyming poetry, simply because of the fact that people tend to stray from the intended story, just to make said poem rhyme. However, you....you have a knack. I enjoyed this immensely. Happy Holidays.
Cavanaugh Avatar
December 15, 2013 at 2:56 PM
But with radar channels track / His rain deer flying from east to west / And his sleigh and magical sack / Filled with items kids like best. Good one robin. Keep an eye on Santa's progress this year.
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