Who's Got the Key

I once drank, from a crystal stream. 
Where on the bank, I did dream. 
Of emerald sky's, with diamond rain. 
N that i could fly, with angel's wing's. 
Cloud's of silver, blew over a turqoize sea. 
With a golden tower of tranquility. 
Then as the heaven's opened up to me. 
Hord's of deamon's, I did see. 
Across the mountain's, over the sea. 
Out from the shadow's, they staired at me. 
Then as I flee at an alarming rate. 
They called for the key. To get in the gate
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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September 27, 2011 at 3:17 PM
Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week Ronnie. Love, Carol
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July 29, 2011 at 8:13 AM
Your poetry is very interesting and holds the readers attention from start to finish Ronnie. Have a splendid weekend and I will return to read more of your writing soon. Love, Carol
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July 29, 2011 at 3:53 PM
Thank you i was a little nervouse about putting them on here at first but its ben nice have a great day
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