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Who's Fault

Auspicious beginning of love
Shinning bright like auriferous
Covered with slight dust
It was all about our trust

I spoiled him with my love
She spoiled him with her beauty
I deserved the love
He spent on her

Calming blue sky
Made me feel terrified
Because under the same blue sheet
Our hearts were beating

While relaxing on chair
I could see separating our pair
My mind was full of thoughts
Because she has trapped us in her plots

Asking those questions
That I can't answer myself
Why I didn't see this coming
When their fingers were intervening

At first I blamed her
It used to drive me bonkers
But they were my lost efforts
That couldn't conquest those lovers!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/8/2018 11:43:00 AM
Love you write. Sadness keeps us until? One day we move on to the light in my picture
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Date: 7/5/2018 5:27:00 AM
Hi IG.. I really enjoyed reading your creative work this morning. Your poem, my dog at my feet, and a hot cup a of Colombian coffee make for a perfect trifecta! Come see me today if you get a chance...
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Ishika Gupta
Date: 7/5/2018 7:18:00 AM
Colombian coffee.. That must be delicious.;) I wish I could but we belong to different nations and it wouldn't be possible. I hope to meet you some day and besides all I'm thankful for the appreciation!!!:D

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