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Auspicious beginning of love Shinning bright like auriferous Covered with slight dust It was all about our trust I spoiled him with my love She spoiled him with her beauty I deserved the love He spent on her Calming blue sky Made me feel terrified Because under the same blue sheet Our hearts were beating While relaxing on chair I could see separating our pair My mind was full of thoughts Because she has trapped us in her plots Asking those questions That I can't answer myself Why I didn't see this coming When their fingers were intervening At first I blamed her It used to drive me bonkers But they were my lost efforts That couldn't conquest those lovers!!!

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Date: 7/8/2018 11:43:00 AM
Love you write. Sadness keeps us until? One day we move on to the light in my picture
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Date: 7/5/2018 5:27:00 AM
Hi IG.. I really enjoyed reading your creative work this morning. Your poem, my dog at my feet, and a hot cup a of Colombian coffee make for a perfect trifecta! Come see me today if you get a chance...
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Ishika Gupta
Date: 7/5/2018 7:18:00 AM
Colombian coffee.. That must be delicious.;) I wish I could but we belong to different nations and it wouldn't be possible. I hope to meet you some day and besides all I'm thankful for the appreciation!!!:D

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