Whoosh

I am one step away from space rocket success This time I’ll soar away with finesse Powered by imagination Space is my next destination Wh oo sh !

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Robb A. Kopp

Date: 1/24/2011 12:53:00 PM

Nice Drawing!

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 1/22/2010 5:12:00 AM

Awesome shape, love the rocket scene, i find this poem quite inspiritational!

Date: 1/21/2010 11:59:00 AM

Artistic presentation with a twist of fun for the reader to enjoy. Hope you attain that success. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Keep on writing! Karen

Brian Strand

Date: 1/20/2010 12:44:00 AM

Very original Nick.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/18/2010 4:49:00 AM

Great job Nick and I suggest u enter this one in the How to Build a Spaceship contest posted under the contest blue line on your member page... it has great possibilities.. my entry is 3...2...1... LIFTOFF.. if u care to read it... thankxxx for your comments and again welcome to our Poetry Soup Family... hope u stay a while... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/17/2010 1:54:00 PM

Hey we both made shapes (pout) Oh well great minds think alike! Light & Love

Sean Kelly

Date: 1/15/2010 9:49:00 AM

You've got lift-off , with this one , Nick . Best of luck in the contest ...