Whoosh


I
am
one
step
away
from
space
rocket
success
This
time
I’ll
soar
away
with
finesse
Powered by
imagination
Space is my
next destination
Wh      oo      sh
!

spaceshape

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Robb A. Kopp

January 24, 2011 at 12:53 PM

Nice Drawing!

Nicole Sharon Brown

January 22, 2010 at 5:12 AM

Awesome shape, love the rocket scene, i find this poem quite inspiritational!

January 21, 2010 at 11:59 AM

Artistic presentation with a twist of fun for the reader to enjoy. Hope you attain that success. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Keep on writing! Karen

Brian Strand

January 20, 2010 at 12:44 AM

Very original Nick.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 18, 2010 at 4:49 AM

Great job Nick and I suggest u enter this one in the How to Build a Spaceship contest posted under the contest blue line on your member page... it has great possibilities.. my entry is 3...2...1... LIFTOFF.. if u care to read it... thankxxx for your comments and again welcome to our Poetry Soup Family... hope u stay a while... luv.. Linda-Marie..