Whole World Has Shook
Whole World Has Shook
By me consistently has to be confessed
With writing poems am becoming obsessed
Continually writing them when I can
So easily all of them you could understand.
Things about poems I have discovered
They are always waiting to be uncovered
With words in them all properly placed
And errors either lined out or erased.
Problems with poems seems to have been
Much repetition of ideas again and again
Also same and/or similar words being used
And on occasion some rules being abused.
Do these identical problems appear to be your
Same problems that more than likely occur
When quality of problems probably did overlook
Result was whole earth being shook and shook.
James Thomas Horn
Retired Veteran and Poet
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