Len Gasun Poet Rhyme

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Whole Day and Night Birthday Party

Like an impetuous dash of time
Everyone  are frenziedly falling in line
As we all eagerly await  at the carpeted  floor
The arrival of our charming celebrity in allure.

Gents got pretty roses… white, yellow, blue and red
Eager to see the majestic beauty -- so great! 
We, ladies make a toast with the best champagne
Cheering and wishing  while her confetti rain

                 Today,  we’ll spend the whole day and night
             Dancing and singing with great delight
      With towering cakes, colorful sweets and big balloons
    Best orchestra   on stage  now play in boon

I sing first in solo for my dearest friend, 
Wishing  her all the happiness which never end
May all the desires of her heart be fulfilled
And her birthday wishes and  dreams be achieved


               Today,  we’ll spend the whole day and night 
           Dancing and singing with great delight
      With towering cakes, colorful sweets and big balloons
Best orchestra  on stage now  play in boon


I play the sweetest melody on my piano
And everyone jigs and  sings for her, too
I recited sweetly  my dedication poem
As we  give our loving hugs,  kisses and roses in bloom.




©2015Leonora Galinta
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October 6, 2015     8.25pm

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Debbie Duncan October 17, 2015 at 5:27 PM This is a very nice poem for Linda, We have tha same birthday Libras ;) Len Gasun November 3, 2015 at 10:40 AM Ops, i am sorry, I supposed to say/write Oct. 26 my return. Hope you've also read my blog. I'm so sorry for a little bit confusion/have missed some b-day celebrities or libras last time coz I was quite occupied too due to my work, classes and mom's health. But, for sure I didn't miss your special day my dearest friend cuz it's the same day with our dearest, Linda. Hugs n kisses! Len Gasun November 3, 2015 at 10:31 AM Yes, my loving friend, Deb. I remembered it by heart and I hope you've read or found my greetings on your poetry page. I went there twice: before i went out of country for two weeks that was last Oct. 11 and after I I came back last Oct. . Again, my best wishes on your special day and the days/ years ahead. God bless. I love you.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 15, 2015 at 5:03 AM Im sure Linda love this stunning lovely poem Leonora.. =`) I really like this... =`) I hope you are doing alright.. hugs and hugs~Olive Eloisa =`) Len Gasun November 3, 2015 at 10:26 AM Thank you so much belatedly for liking my gift for her and your very encouraging comments my very dear amiga, Olive. I'm not sure if she has read or missed this but hope she'll find it soon. I'm quite shy to tell her again. :)

Afolabi Muideen October 7, 2015 at 8:03 PM The smooth and eloquent flow of your piece depicted imagery that brought to the readers sense the beauty within this wonderful write... I love how this was constructed beautifully. Excellent..........A.M. Len Gasun October 9, 2015 at 7:52 AM Thank you so much my very dear friend, Afolabi but I really hope this gift of mine although so simple, will be appreciated soon by our dearest poetess and friend who celebrated her birthday yesterday. I pray that she's enjoyed well her birthday. Quite worried:((. Anyway, thank you, thank you so much and many hugs to you! God bless!

Ravi Sathasivam October 7, 2015 at 3:51 AM Excellent. Lovely birthday poem for your friend. I am sure she will enjoy this one. Thanks for sharing it. Len Gasun October 7, 2015 at 10:52 AM I hope she'll appreciate this simple gift of mine my very dear friend, Ravi. The celebrity is not here yet. Hope she has a wonderful birthday celebration. TYTYSM again and Many hugs to you!

Tim Smith October 6, 2015 at 6:31 PM A lovely poem Leonora and a happy happy birthday to Linda !!! Len Gasun October 7, 2015 at 10:54 AM Thank you so much for sharing your precious time to read my simple gift to our dearest friend my dear friend, Tim but this poem came deeply from my heart. Tytysm and many hugs to you!

Alexis Y. October 6, 2015 at 4:51 PM Lenora, this is a beautiful BIRTHDAY poem for a friend. I know she will just love it. May I join in the celebration? HAPPY BIRTHDAY PD:-) Alexis Len Gasun October 7, 2015 at 10:57 AM Thank you, thank you so much my very dear friend, Alexis. I hope so my very dear friend. I'm sure she'll let you join as much as I do. Many hugs to you from me!