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Whole Day and Night Birthday Party

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Like an impetuous dash of time Everyone are frenziedly falling in line As we all eagerly await at the carpeted floor The arrival of our charming celebrity in allure. Gents got pretty roses… white, yellow, blue and red Eager to see the majestic beauty -- so great! We, ladies make a toast with the best champagne Cheering and wishing while her confetti rain Today, we’ll spend the whole day and night Dancing and singing with great delight With towering cakes, colorful sweets and big balloons Best orchestra on stage now play in boon I sing first in solo for my dearest friend, Wishing her all the happiness which never end May all the desires of her heart be fulfilled And her birthday wishes and dreams be achieved Today, we’ll spend the whole day and night Dancing and singing with great delight With towering cakes, colorful sweets and big balloons Best orchestra on stage now play in boon I play the sweetest melody on my piano And everyone jigs and sings for her, too I recited sweetly my dedication poem As we give our loving hugs, kisses and roses in bloom. ©2015Leonora Galinta All Rights Reserved October 6, 2015 8.25pm

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 10/17/2015 5:27:00 PM

This is a very nice poem for Linda, We have tha same birthday Libras ;)

Len Gasun
Date: 11/3/2015 10:40:00 AM

Ops, i am sorry, I supposed to say/write Oct. 26 my return. Hope you've also read my blog. I'm so sorry for a little bit confusion/have missed some b-day celebrities or libras last time coz I was quite occupied too due to my work, classes and mom's health. But, for sure I didn't miss your special day my dearest friend cuz it's the same day with our dearest, Linda. Hugs n kisses!

Len Gasun
Date: 11/3/2015 10:31:00 AM

Yes, my loving friend, Deb. I remembered it by heart and I hope you've read or found my greetings on your poetry page. I went there twice: before i went out of country for two weeks that was last Oct. 11 and after I I came back last Oct. . Again, my best wishes on your special day and the days/ years ahead. God bless. I love you.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 10/15/2015 5:03:00 AM

Im sure Linda love this stunning lovely poem Leonora.. =`) I really like this... =`) I hope you are doing alright.. hugs and hugs~Olive Eloisa =`)

Len Gasun
Date: 11/3/2015 10:26:00 AM

Thank you so much belatedly for liking my gift for her and your very encouraging comments my very dear amiga, Olive. I'm not sure if she has read or missed this but hope she'll find it soon. I'm quite shy to tell her again. :)

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 10/7/2015 8:03:00 PM

The smooth and eloquent flow of your piece depicted imagery that brought to the readers sense the beauty within this wonderful write... I love how this was constructed beautifully. Excellent..........A.M.

Len Gasun
Date: 10/9/2015 7:52:00 AM

Thank you so much my very dear friend, Afolabi but I really hope this gift of mine although so simple, will be appreciated soon by our dearest poetess and friend who celebrated her birthday yesterday. I pray that she's enjoyed well her birthday. Quite worried:((. Anyway, thank you, thank you so much and many hugs to you! God bless!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 10/7/2015 3:51:00 AM

Excellent. Lovely birthday poem for your friend. I am sure she will enjoy this one. Thanks for sharing it.

Len Gasun
Date: 10/7/2015 10:52:00 AM

I hope she'll appreciate this simple gift of mine my very dear friend, Ravi. The celebrity is not here yet. Hope she has a wonderful birthday celebration. TYTYSM again and Many hugs to you!

Tim Smith

Date: 10/6/2015 6:31:00 PM

A lovely poem Leonora and a happy happy birthday to Linda !!!

Len Gasun
Date: 10/7/2015 10:54:00 AM

Thank you so much for sharing your precious time to read my simple gift to our dearest friend my dear friend, Tim but this poem came deeply from my heart. Tytysm and many hugs to you!

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/6/2015 4:51:00 PM

Lenora, this is a beautiful BIRTHDAY poem for a friend. I know she will just love it. May I join in the celebration? HAPPY BIRTHDAY PD:-) Alexis

Len Gasun
Date: 10/7/2015 10:57:00 AM

Thank you, thank you so much my very dear friend, Alexis. I hope so my very dear friend. I'm sure she'll let you join as much as I do. Many hugs to you from me!