Who Would Want To Be You X 2

If you wanna know whats in my mind
un-normal things that normal people just dont find
Its like a break from the norm 
2 steps to the right into the centre of the room
my mind is your doom
time is nothing but something to consume
yesturday feels so much like tomorrow
but yet you sit sit sit do not understand
typical
2 steps to the left
breath 
breath
breath
take a seat
repeat
take a seat
If you want to know whats in my mind
find it for me
open it 
if its empty its lost 
just what i thought
WHERE IS MY MIND.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
April 5, 2010 at 10:50 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Ashlew. Please continue to write and share with us. Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
April 5, 2010 at 5:32 AM
interesting ideas--could be a deep topic.
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