Andrea M Christian Poet Enclosed Rhyme

Who Will Save Me

The drum beats silent 
to the sound of my aching heart

He runs his callused hands across my olive skin
Bitter is my heart

As I lye quietly in my bed
dreaming of a life I may have had

If only I would have looked the other way
The road less traveled they say

My weakness was his gain
Come with me he whispered 
let me show you the way

Now I lay choking on my blood wasting my life away
Who will save me now 

Even God seems so far away.

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Skat A May 5, 2016 at 1:22 AM Andrea, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. --SKAT

Poet Destroyer A April 20, 2016 at 2:34 AM Andrea M Christian, nicely done. Glad to read your poem today. XoX *Linda*"

Susan Palli September 20, 2010 at 3:17 AM I see you don't have soup mail. James 4:8 reads: "Draw close to God and He will draw close to you." If you wish, pray about it.

Susan Palli September 20, 2010 at 3:14 AM Can feel the emotions.(soup mail)

Eve Apple September 1, 2010 at 9:40 PM Another amazing write, Brings me back to my first marriage.

Adeleke Adeite August 25, 2010 at 6:17 PM ... I would like to say welcome to the Soup, keep your poetry pen dancing to the drumbeat of your passion and pride... you will find a lot of encouragements here... keep up the great work. Love always, Adeleke

Marymkilker Marymkilker August 24, 2010 at 9:33 PM So sad but you have a gift for words. And god loves us all.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 24, 2010 at 7:59 AM God is always very near ..just feel HIS LUV and u can get through anything.. enjoyed your words from your heart today... a special blend of pain and loss and still hope in your last line .. enjoyed ..with luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 24, 2010 at 7:08 AM Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight... looking forward to many more.. with luv... ciao..

Carol Sunshine Brown August 24, 2010 at 5:14 AM I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Maizy. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol