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Who Will Save Me

The drum beats silent to the sound of my aching heart He runs his callused hands across my olive skin Bitter is my heart As I lye quietly in my bed dreaming of a life I may have had If only I would have looked the other way The road less traveled they say My weakness was his gain Come with me he whispered let me show you the way Now I lay choking on my blood wasting my life away Who will save me now Even God seems so far away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/5/2016 1:22:00 AM
Andrea, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. --SKAT
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Date: 4/20/2016 2:34:00 AM
Andrea M Christian, nicely done. Glad to read your poem today. XoX *Linda*"
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Date: 9/20/2010 3:17:00 AM
I see you don't have soup mail. James 4:8 reads: "Draw close to God and He will draw close to you." If you wish, pray about it.
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Date: 9/20/2010 3:14:00 AM
Can feel the emotions.(soup mail)
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Date: 9/1/2010 9:40:00 PM
Another amazing write, Brings me back to my first marriage.
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Date: 8/25/2010 6:17:00 PM
... I would like to say welcome to the Soup, keep your poetry pen dancing to the drumbeat of your passion and pride... you will find a lot of encouragements here... keep up the great work. Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 8/24/2010 9:33:00 PM
So sad but you have a gift for words. And god loves us all.
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Date: 8/24/2010 7:59:00 AM
God is always very near ..just feel HIS LUV and u can get through anything.. enjoyed your words from your heart today... a special blend of pain and loss and still hope in your last line .. enjoyed ..with luv..
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Date: 8/24/2010 7:08:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight... looking forward to many more.. with luv... ciao..
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Date: 8/24/2010 5:14:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Maizy. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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